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tearsinheaven
Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-06-29 02:34 PM


Deep runs my blood with sorrow
For i see no tomorrow
No future with you
We will not last i fear
Though i do love you my dear
The darkness grows over me
Consuming all the light you've shown
We are not meant to be
But i wish not to be free
Please come back to me

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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-06-29 03:04 PM


Nicely put, and deeply felt.
Catalinamoon

Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
2 posted 2000-06-29 03:18 PM


Good work! I know the feeling well. Ah!,yes,
unrequited love.

It takes far less energy to love than to hate!

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-29 03:23 PM


we're never meant to be..I hear these words in dreeeams..just get over with it..

Sincerely
A_L

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-06-29 09:02 PM


i feel  you 110% sucks to know that the 1 you love wont be the 1 you'll be with 4 ever

Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might have,
and should have.
--Louis Boone


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-06-30 12:53 PM


point made so clear as always loved the read and can't wait to read more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

6 posted 2000-06-30 08:17 AM


Hiya    This is a really touching poem... put very well indeed.  I enjoyed reading your work very much.
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
7 posted 2000-06-30 11:06 AM


Nice Post !!!!!!  Now this one brings back the memories.  Sad ones yet very learning memories.  Great work my Friend!!!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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