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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-06-29 09:19 PM




Amber I have some questions for you
Like if I were to kiss you what would you do
Would you give me a smile and think it was nice
Or perhaps you would slap me to make me think twice

If I were now to take your hand your hand
Would you stroll with me upon the sand
Would you watch with me the end of day
Or is answer no all that you'd say

If I were to sweep you off your feet
While we were walking down the street
Would you laugh and think it was sweet
Or get all embarrassed and want no repeat

If I were to hold you tight in my arms
Would I remove all of your harms
Would you feel safe with me while you stay
Or would you just simply push me away

These questions now I give unto you
All though I know not what they will do
Time spent with you I shall not squander
I tell you true with these thoughts that I ponder


G.  A. Webb

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Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



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G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
1 posted 2000-06-29 09:22 PM


Hi gang!

Well this is an experiment. My increadibly good looking neighbors had requested that I write a poem for them. So this is the first of two. I'll submit the other upon it's completion. I hope you like this one in the mean time. Take care all!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-06-29 09:27 PM


~Hiya G,...how are ya?  I say just go for it. hehe. This is great. Definately enjoyed thanks. Take care. *Peace.
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-06-29 09:40 PM


I have heard it said that if you kissed a hundred women whom you did not know, you would only be slapped 99 times..
Like your chances???
I like the wondering tone of it.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-30 12:58 PM


the wonder of the answers are great. and how many times i have asked these same questions and never got the answer i wanted.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2000-06-30 10:02 AM


SpitFire: Hi spitfire. I'm doing just fine thank you. How are you? I think I will go for it, but I'm take this one on slowly. Wish me luck! I'm glad you liked it, thank you.  

Prometheus: I'm not so sure I like those odds...lol. But I'm a gambling man, so what the hell, I'll take a shot. Thanks!  

Jeremiah Johnson: Yes, I too have asked those same questions before and didn't get the answer I was looking for. Oh well, there's always another, ya know. Thanks!  

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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