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LarBear
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York

0 posted 2000-06-28 03:52 PM



The Pain feels so great
   In my heart
    A love that can not wait
      A Love with restrictions

Tears fall; one is too many
   In my soul
    A love that sits silently
      A Love with real intentions

Emotions go without reason
   In my body
    A love that is in question
      A love with many dangers

The misery I cannot believe
    In my mind
     A love in desperate need
       A love circled in depression

Wanting you, I can not have
    In my spirit
     A love without embrace
         A love deprived of aspiration

Married, but love another
    In my everything
      A love that somehow happened
         A love that is forbidden

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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-06-28 05:19 PM


oh dear, larbear.  such pain here.  why is it love is painful, no matter what you do??  ...a love with real intentions.... what a line!! i felt every word of this poem.  not married, but definitely have loved and love ones that will never be mine.  good for you for getting it out.  keep em coming.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

LuckyinLove
Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57
Australia
2 posted 2000-06-28 09:24 PM


Oh dear, I used to love someone so much, but he wasn't worth it, I wish I could love someone again, at lease you can love, I know that is not very comforting, sorry

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-06-28 10:13 PM


Forbidden love....such sweetness, such danger.  Nice, well done.   Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-06-28 11:55 PM


Wow, "A love with restrictions". It sounds like we are going through the same thing. Its so hard, and yet so special and bittersweet. Good luck, I hope you can have her in the end..
Catalinamoon

LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
5 posted 2000-06-29 11:57 AM


All,

Thanks for the comments:

Forbiden love itself is painfull, left for tears. Wanting to have, so bad... and not being able too, is the part of life we dont understand. Just remember the experance and tuck it away deep down inside your heart.

Love keeps the world smiling

LarBear

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
6 posted 2000-06-29 11:36 PM


forbiden love is so very painful i hope that you are past this in your life. and i to am bared with this same fate but for me it with last forever.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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