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Dark Poetry #2

My Feelings About You !!!

fantasyhoneybabe
Junior Member

since 2000-06-26

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-06-29 04:37 AM

There's a fire in my heart ,
Not knowing what to do
When you are always around .

You just take me higher ,
Everytime you kiss me on the lips .

I was lost everytime i'm without you ,
but comforted everytime i'm with you .

It feels like flying just being around you
you drive me crazy ,

so ,
What am i supposed to do when i'm without you ???

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-06-29 04:42 AM

Could it be that you are in love? A very lucky person that is to have such lovely poems written for them!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

2 posted 2000-06-29 08:29 AM

I love that feeling of truly wanting a person near, and then the emptiness when they are gone..how we miss them!! Very nice peom!!!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-06-29 08:38 AM

Nice sentiment, FHB. Well expressed. Hardrock

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

4 posted 2000-06-29 09:54 AM

Awwwwwww the feelings of being in love. And the disappointment it can bring.

Nice poem
Peace

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-06-29 11:01 AM

I think the only thing we can do when he's not around is write more poetry..
Great expression of that feeling. I have it too.
Catalinamoon

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

6 posted 2000-06-29 11:34 PM

great piece and expression love it very much and i hope to see more work from you like this but i do hope that this person is your true love and not someone who just steals your heart.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

7 posted 2000-06-29 11:37 PM

oh I can't wait to fall in love again, come on love come and get me.

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