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Allstaria22
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-06-25 10:01 PM

This is the last day
of my pathedic useless life
where I will have no more
time to cry
and no chance to
forgive
all those who hurt me
or to apologize to
the ones I took so much
pleasure in hurting
that was me
the one that said I was
your friend
that plunged the
knife into your back
while you gave me your trust
maybe I was your friend
I treat friends that way too
maybe you weren't
and it was all just a
damn lie
where I got all
and gave you none
do I even care anymore
I'm on my way out
and I'll never see you again
in my own little hell
where I'll miss
what I neveer had
and remember all you could have given me
all I could have loved
but even memories
eventualy fade away.

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

1 posted 2000-06-25 10:59 PM

I hope that you read your words and learnt by your mistakes, A true friend is so hard to find, and if you have one you have to treasure it, Friendship is gift someone gives you look after it.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-06-26 01:10 AM

Yes kid memories do fade, but your words will live forever.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-26 02:47 AM

yes a true friend is dear and to be held close which i hope you do. and as joel said these words here are how we live on. and i know with all the poems books and stories i write i won't be forgotten ever. say would any of you like to be part of a book i'm writing? if so please email me for info i trying to get it all together real soon. great read here loved it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-06-26 08:30 AM

Hi, I have not read any of your poems before, this was very strong and almost fiercely angry. It sounds like you are angry at yourself, and if you are, let it go, and just be who you want to be. Easy to say but hard to do, I know. If its someone else you are angry with, same thought, let it go, cause its hurting you too much. Take care.
Catalinamoon

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