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Dark Poetry #2

Upper Air Disturbance

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2000-06-23 11:48 PM

Tonight I find myself holding up my chin
     With an uncomfortable feeling
        Raging deep from within
       What is this disturbance?
         An unsettled air mass?
      A deep tropical depression?
       An upper air instability?
        An advancing cold front?
            Instinctively
           I run for cover
         At the slightest hint
       Of precipitating weather
              Changes..
        Instead of opening up
             My umbrella
             And walking
        Carefree in the rain..

[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 06-23-2000).]

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-06-24 12:36 PM

yes we do run from the ?? impending storm, insted of just weathering it out.

Great idea kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-06-24 01:38 AM

sorry but i don't run i do like a bad thunder storm when their around it kind of helps me out. great piece though love your work. keep them coming.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-06-24 11:04 AM

There is no bad weather.....only inappropriate clothing. So it is with relationships, when we fail to gird ourselves with the proper "garments" of forgivness, tolerance, acceptance and passion. Even dark passion is better than no passion at all. Well done...well said....Hardrock

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