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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-06-13 08:27 PM


He's never seen my face,
Never been physicaly close to me,
But I wonder if he truly cares,
Just from little things he's said to me.

Could I be the stuff his dreams are made of,
Could he love one such as I?
Or does he say it only to be polite,
A different kind of friendship under a different hued sky?

I may not find the answers,
It may all be in my imagination,
But these thoughts alone,
Have awakened the sleeping goddess and could be her salvation.........


 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-06-13 09:15 PM


Isis,

There is nothing wrong with dreaming.  It is good if he gives you strength when you are feeling weak.  I hope you find your salvation....wherever it may lie.  Nice writing.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

DarkLisha
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 4

2 posted 2000-06-13 09:20 PM


Dreaming is good for the soul...

 "True heros are found within darkness. I have yet to meet a knight who is deprived of being torn between dark and light."-DarkLisha

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-13 11:14 PM


And dreams are all this is!!!     Just playing alas it is not true!! LOL  
Welcome also Dark Lisha!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-06-14 12:53 PM


Isis,
     love takes many forms my friend. . . you know that. . .and even though we may have never seen or touched the one that we love or care about, doens't mean that the feelings can't be there. . .

Excellent, my friend. . .

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-06-14 02:06 AM


I know that hon still dreams are fun!!!  I like them  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-06-14 03:30 PM


Dreams are fun, you're right.  And can often be salvation!

Here are smiles from me just for you, Isis!
        

Joy

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
7 posted 2000-06-14 04:15 PM


Dreams are great. I love day dreaming, and letting my thoughts wander as I seem to be doing with my new poems. Dreams have often allowed me to survive some storms in life. A wonderful poem Isis. Keep dreaming.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating



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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-06-14 09:31 PM


Thanks guys!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
9 posted 2000-06-16 12:02 PM


Ahhhh!  dreams.
Love you kid. hahaha


Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
10 posted 2000-06-16 10:58 AM


We have two lives, the one we live and the one that holds our dreams.  I hope the sleeping goddess has awakened to discover the life that holds her dreams.
~~nice writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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