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Alina Le Ann
Junior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 40
INDIANA

0 posted 2000-06-12 02:22 AM

Brian My Dream

You came into my life so fast
And gave me love I hoped would last
Days went by and time stood still
You took my heart and made a deal

To me you promised to be true
To cherrish my love for only you
In your arms you'd hold me tight
Thinking of me day and night

You'd smile at me to make my day
To win your heart I'd sit and pray
With a ring and on one knee
You sweetly whispered "marry me"

To this I did not hesitate
I married you my one sould mate
This dream with you I hope comes true
Brian baby I love you

Dedicated to my one true love Brian Phelps
I LOVE YOU BABY

Alina Le Ann

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-06-12 06:17 AM

This is so sweet. I'm always trying to write a poem like his for my husband, but somehow it doesn't work. The fact that he *hates* poetry doesn't help, though!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-06-12 03:20 PM

Another beautiful and touching poem Alina... I love the depth in your poetry. Keep'em coming.
D.E.< !signature-->

Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-12-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-06-12 05:51 PM

~Hi there,....this is quite beautiful,..this poem. A happy and uplifting piece...it's lovely. Not a bit of dark that I can find. It's more like sunshine.

. Wonderfully written. Take care. *Peace.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-06-12 06:09 PM

Alina this is beautiful and romantic...James

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

5 posted 2000-06-14 12:16 PM

this is so heartfelt, so rich of love, I wish you all the wonders in love my friend.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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