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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-07-18 11:10 PM


You have just lost what you sought,
I should warn you but I ought to not,
Letting it go was the worst thing you have done
Now you request me to make it undone,
Light of truth, which shines in its marvel,
At the scene of justice arrival,
Questions of life with answers in sight
You can’t see since the blinding light,
Emotions of yours you fail to control,
For that reason you have lost it all.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-07-18 11:31 PM


"Emotions of yours you fail to control,
For that reason you have lost it all."

big truth...this happens all too often..

nice poem  

dg


"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

Heather Miller
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Bryan, Ohio USA
2 posted 2000-07-19 12:47 PM


Very nice !!!!!!! Thank you for sharing.
LITL,
Heather Anne Miller/Gambler


With God all things are possible.

Xeonox
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3 posted 2000-07-24 01:28 AM


Thank you for posting your thoughts and giving me your support.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Toddles
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4 posted 2000-07-25 03:08 AM


Really Nice Xeonox, keep sharing!!!


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Geoffrey Sonnen
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5 posted 2000-07-27 07:20 PM


Much Truth in there. Remember, Fear is an emotion too. A lot to lose even in that.very well written.

Geoffrey

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