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Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
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Reading, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 04:21 PM


Berating schism
   like steel talons...lacerating freedom
Tangible chasm
   between the binders and the bound
Unfound
   while staring unabated
      through obstructions
         like stalagmites
Lost behind the spectres
   that have risen from your "ground"

What bars are there within you ?
   ( you close your eyes )
Do you deny what is contained ?
   ( never realise )
The lies lie low
You do not know
Your "Prison" has remained...

Eradicating "ism"
   like real daggers imbedded in your Soul
Sharpened as 'em
   You sever all the "You"
      from where you once had flown
You flew
   but with wings out of your cage
      through obstructions
         strapped on tight
Lost within the Realm Of The Unknown
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[This message has been edited by Geoffrey Sonnen (edited 07-16-2000).]

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Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-24 12:42 PM


Wanted to send this to the top because *sniff* no one read it *sniffle* *honk*.Know its different from the others, but its one of the few recent ones I've written and has much meaning to me in reference to the Walls and Prisons people can make for themselves most times in the Realm of Denial, as I am most assuredly and most potently witnessing now within the "Love That's Never Found".  
Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
2 posted 2000-07-24 12:46 PM


I'm kinda new here or I probably would have seen it sooner. Glad you brought it to the top. Very good.
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-24 09:26 PM


Thank you Heather for reading. I forgive you for being new (hee !) Welcome to Passions.

Peace, Geoffrey

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
4 posted 2000-07-27 01:56 PM


Well thank you for your forgivness
I have been reading your work, you are quite good!!!
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.



Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
5 posted 2000-07-27 07:24 PM


Thank you Heather, that is really nice of you to say. I like your work too. Your expressions are very real and are felt.

Geoff

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
6 posted 2000-07-27 07:29 PM


That is the nicest thing anyone has ever said about my work   Thank you, you just set my heart a flight  
Luvs ya,
Heather

With God all things are possible.



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