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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-08-29 12:11 PM


Mysterious as the moon
More wild than the Lion
of the jungle
The woman seems to have
men baffled by far it
seems.

We are soft
passionate, loving
and very beautiful
creations
of which God did make
for all the Adams of the world

We are Eve
we tempt you with the forbidden
fruit, but somehow this seems to suit
you to a tee.

Mysterious as the night
that makes you so uptight
but follow our lead
and you soon will see
were very compassionate
to your needs if you supply
us with some dreams
to share together.

So uncover your ears and eyes
see what is before you
don't try to avoid it
the woman that stands here
wanting you to be
a part of her heart
of this please my dear
come join me
to enjoy all the pleasures
we can possibly surrender to.


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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-08-29 02:38 AM


Women are fantastic. I give an A+ to that. Great little poem.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-08-29 11:30 AM


ah thx xeonox , oh by the way what a name how did you get it? thanks for the A+
susanbartee
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since 2000-08-15
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3 posted 2000-08-29 01:04 PM


Love it.  If only the Adams of the world could see their Eves dreams, we could give so much more in return.  Hopefully, someday (no time soon)I will find my Adam.
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-08-30 12:55 PM


sometimes i'm sorry to say men can be shall we say stubborn and not listen to a word we say.. sorry guys I'm sure it's not you just the other ten million hehe
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