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ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

0 posted 2000-08-17 05:45 PM

As the candlelight flickers in the darkness
And catches the essence of your brown skin
I see myself drifting, getting lost in your eyes
All while holding your hand.

A fresh cool breeze blows through the window
And whisks through you velvety hair
You throw your head back and smile
As you inhale the godly refreshing air.

You speak with a voice that's so serene
And it plays a blissfully sweet melody in my ear
I hang onto every word that parts your smile
And each seems to gesture for me to come near.

I kiss you ever so gently on your scented wrist
And gaze one last time into your eyes
I turn and look towards the heavens
As I lay my head upon you thigh.

Garfield

ladysixstring
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-17 05:50 PM

So many great lines, but oh how wonderful... "I hang onto every word that parts your smile And each seems to gesture for me to come near." How fantastic to experience those feelings for another human being.

-jaimie
http://www.ladysixstring.com

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

2 posted 2000-08-17 06:02 PM

Thanks ladysixstring
I'm really glad you liked this one. Hopefully many more will enjoy it also. Again thanks for your comments.

Garfield

Knight Dreams
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 46
Austin, Texas

3 posted 2000-08-17 06:34 PM

What great feelings a loved one can bring

You have shown it well in your words here. Well done

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-08-17 07:52 PM

Very romantic, ggrn3, done with grace and style. I like it...

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

5 posted 2000-08-17 08:05 PM

Balladeer & Knight Dreams

Thanks for your response. I believe everyone will enjoy the next one I write. I collaborated with a friend and we were both proud of it. Everyone look for "Quiet Storm."

Garfield

ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-08-17 08:19 PM

Garfield

Ohhhhhhhh how sensuous and loving. Very nicely done.

didi

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2000-08-17 08:34 PM

ggrn3. . . simply superb. . .

I like this one very much. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2000-08-17 08:52 PM

Wow G, this is a great piece because your thoughts flowed so well and the poem had great rhythm to it. Welcome to Passions and I wish you luck on your poetry.

Nathan

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

9 posted 2000-08-17 09:10 PM

Sven & didi

Thanks for your kind words.

Garfield

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

10 posted 2000-08-17 09:13 PM

Nate Dogg

Hey thanks for the kind words. Hey, I also like your style. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Garfield

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

11 posted 2000-08-17 10:43 PM

Excellent ggrn3. Enjoyed this one and welcome to Passions.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2000-08-18 03:55 AM

I loved this. You have SUCH a gift for writing. This was just wonderful!!

Michael

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