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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-08-16 10:16 AM

I
Am alone

I can't see anything

I
Sit in the dark

I
Feel my heart beating

I Try to speak

My
Pulse is fast

My
Body shakes

My
Ears hear nothing

My
Arms touch nothing

My
Body is cold

I
Scream
No sound is heard

I
Am alone

written for those who do feel alone at times when they need someone the most.

stay cool

~~Lavada~~
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"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-16-2000).]

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-08-16 10:50 AM

Something I forgot to add...It is not I who feels this way, but as I am good at putting myself in someone elses shoes, I wrote this for a friend.

thanks for understanding

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-08-16 10:58 AM

I
Can understand
What you are trying to say

But
I would have thought
if the title were Me instead
it would have been easier
to click to read the poem...

.....

nice poem by the way... the now-married-sweetcollegegirl...

regards
Sudhir

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

3 posted 2000-08-16 11:09 AM

Thanks sudhir, for the reply and the congrats (is that what it was?)

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

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