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Gone (still up for the challenge)
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Gone (still up for the challenge) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Wow what an inspiration you have been Mark.....I just can't get enough...just a few lines can get my imagination running....thank you for this challenege it has been fun....  if and when have come and gone and gone is here to taunt i am tired and broken can't give forever another thought through tear stained eyes and lovers lies never a compromise all the bitterness and pain through countless hours i felt my energy drain the fire blew out long ago sorry i didn't let you know tommorrow hath forsaken us yesterday gone in a rush and on that perfumed scented letter i told you it was for the better and a strange wind was blowing through that open door i knew what was coming felt it to the bitter core destiny wasn't held up in your hand we left our hearts buried in the sand if and when we always said now they have come and gone all has washed away gone is here to taunt us through another day |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good writing, can you hear the applause echoing around the stadium. To the victor goes the spoils. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Applause for sure...running the mile under "3" minutes now ......A WORLD RECORD BY ALMOST A FULL MINUTE!!!!!!!!!!!! Cheers and waves of human bodies thrown across the stadium. GOLD MEDAL GOLD MEDAL GOLD MEDAL!!!!!!!! You have taken this and run with it well. Astounding creation from you and I am so happy you joined. Now what have you got for the remaining ones. I want you back out there and bringing home another gold. You got it going now go and get it.  |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
...gone is here to taunt us... ...very cool Julie... Tony  |
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