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Kissing Buttercups
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Kissing Buttercups |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Kissing Buttercups Kissing buttercups soft and shy, in fields of emerald flush. With bumble bees and antique trees and fancy stems that fly. Kissing there in warmth of sun, in heated solar streams. With fragranced rays and shiny days and blankets falling fun. Kissing, kissing, buttercups shy, in days of flying free. With smile's chimes and floating times and journeys to the sky. |
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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
I like this poem. I think it's very sweet. You give very good details. You describe things so beautifully. I can invision them. Love your work. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 Hold it right there! Freeze! This is the Love Police!! We've had you under observation for quite some time now! We have reason to believe you may be carrying buttercups against there will? Have you had any physical contact with these sweet little Buttercups? You don't have to answer that! We are going to have to take you down town where we can strip search…umm! I mean search you for any weapons..like whips or well anything fun!…I MEAN dangerous!!! There has been a complaint from a buttercup that your kisses are…. well just too damn hot!!! I think this time your just going to get a warning! OK so in the mean time just cool it all right! Be on your way now. Wait a second here's your clothes back! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ What an adorable little skip-along ! I love it and the imagery it brings. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely visuals, spitfire... regards, sudhir |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
gorgeous. loved every word of it. (the buttercups like it too!) *LOL* ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful breezy fly through the meadow of your mind...loved it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This just plain made me feel GOOD...full of whimsy and wonder...a delightful read, spitfire! |
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