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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-08-08 09:14 AM



Magic words unspoken cast their spell within
                                   the night..
Through the silent window with it's glowing
                                  eery light..
From sleepy eyes to hungry mind, is where the
                                magic starts..
Then swirling, ever gently,
               to the waiting, anxious heart..


Unsuspecting innocence awaits the spell
                                 that's cast..
Throwing off the heavy chains that bound it
                                 in the past..
Unlocking every exit through which wisdom
                                  can depart..
To then reveal with trembling hand the
                      waiting, anxious heart..


Open now, with no defense, and nothing in
                                     the way..
The magic spell with silent stealth invades
                           it's waiting prey..
If fills the caves of lonliness, and seals
                            the broken parts..
Then settles in, it's spell to spin, on
                     waiting, anxious hearts..


The spell of love is such that only chosen
                              ones can break..
And only ones within it's reach possess that
                              choice to make..
The lucky ones are those who give the spell
                            a place to start..
It joins in everlasting love..

          Two waiting, anxious hearts..
                      
                  


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
1 posted 2000-08-08 09:16 AM


Applauding loudly Sunny.  Excellent  
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-08-08 09:22 AM


Sunny this is so wonderfully tender and sweet.  The casting of love's spell is one that this man will forever accept and the spell you cast with your words are accepted as graciously as well. Well written and beautiful thoughts.  
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-08-08 09:27 AM


Eloise..
        I thank you very much, and I can
        hear you applaud which is appreciated
                    indeed!!

Mark..
        I am really glad you liked this one!
        I believe there are certain spells
        that work, and it never hurts to try!
          Spells given, spells received..
            One of life's mysterious
                     gifts!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2000-08-08 07:05 PM


Sunny,
Another one of your romantic writings that is so touching. Where oh where do you find them all? They must be from your heart.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
5 posted 2000-08-08 07:43 PM


Another flower in your bouquet my friend
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2000-08-08 08:11 PM


Sunny1,
Bravo this one is a keeper.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2000-08-08 09:17 PM



Bill....They just come from wishful thinking,
        daydreaming, and some reality thrown
        in!!!
              Thank you....I always love to
                 read what you have to say!

Paula....Thank you for the sweet reply!!
         I'm finding that most bouquets need
         a shot of Miracle Grow!!

Seymour....Bless you for your kindness!!!!!
        


I have but one goal in
life......It is: Not to
have just one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2000-08-08 09:43 PM


Ah, another love spell. I like this theme, and your writing is just phenomenal. Can you send me a recommended love spell?  
Catalinamoon

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
9 posted 2000-08-09 11:59 AM


Hi catalinamoon....
  
         The only love spell that I know of
   is that of words....communication....
   Words pulled from so deep in your heart
   and soul that it almost hurts to bring
   them out with all their emotion.
             It's got to come from your
                 heart......
          Thank you for reading this!!


I have but one goal in
life......It is: Not to
have just one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~



Auguste
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By the sea
10 posted 2000-08-09 12:15 PM


Sunny,

This is excellent!!!  Wonderfully written and so very romantic.  I'm becoming a big fan of yours.

Michael




Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
11 posted 2000-08-09 12:20 PM


Hello Auguste (I love that name!!)....

   Ahhhh.....then it is a mutual fan club,
               my friend.....
       I thank you for reading this today!


I have but one goal in
life......It is: Not to
have just one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~



Steve B
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 140
Southern PA
12 posted 2000-08-09 02:43 PM


Sunny...I have read several of your poems so far and  they are all so  beautifuly done...
enjoyed them all much....*S*  Steve B

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
13 posted 2000-08-09 02:59 PM


Hi Steve....
           I thank you much for such a kind
           reply, and I'm looking forward to
           seeing more of your work here!!!
                


I have only one goal
in life..
It Is:
To have more than
one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
14 posted 2000-08-09 03:00 PM


Here  before me another beauty lies
to cast its spell upon my wondering eyes
Bewitching phrases to soften  hard hearts
Giving bright shining  hopes for brand new starts.

Another of your lovely poems I have enjoyed reading Sunny1.
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Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".  




[This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 08-09-2000).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
15 posted 2000-08-10 11:14 AM


Jamie....
         It is always such a pleasure to read
         your words, whether in a reply or a
         posting. I take them to heart and
         there put them in a safe place.

               Thank you, my friend.....


I have only one goal
in life..
It Is:
To have more than
one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~

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