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jennie may*
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122


0 posted 2000-08-08 12:50 PM


a picture of you

frosted remains in
February gray
skies and

I can still look at you
even if you can't
see me.


blurry edges
and
silence
in your face

black and white
frame
of my love for you

helpless that I  
only have
a glossy photograph

to keep us alive
inside of me



© Copyright 2000 jennie may* - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-08-08 12:54 PM


photographs and memories...cherished treasures of our past...such a sad sad write
Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
2 posted 2000-08-08 12:58 PM


funny what a picture can do to us and the emotions it is able to pull out,..... good writing..........
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