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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-08-08 01:56 AM


The lush valley's with such green grass,
I only need to pass through the corners of your
fine nourished fields.
So gently the rain falls upon the flowers
surrounding the pine trees whipering in the breeze.
The colors of the daisies with delicate fine remembrances of the rose's that were there.
The swing sets that have children playing
on them high up in the air.
Such freedom in the valley that sits high up
on this hill.
So much laugher ehoes down the other side
and soon others join in.
The children are singing as they merrily go round.
All is well in this playland which soon must come to an end.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-08 02:30 AM


RoseBud~
The playground of our memory never closes.

Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-08-08 12:03 PM


Your so right Marge just until another day where we can play again Does bring back memories .
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-08-08 12:54 PM


I know we all have happy thoughts of our childhood if you had one word to describe what would it be. Mine would be chocolate...
why I remember drinking my chocolate milk I LOVED it so. I hated the regular milk so good thing there were chocolate cows lol

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