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Unbreakable
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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UnbreakableThe sound of your voice Whispering your love to me The feel of your hand Touching the side of my face My heart filling with this love Feelings so tender Your love renews my spirit My love for you grows In my heart body and soul Love unbreakable and strong. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25.... Oh, I loved the line: 'Love Unbreakable and strong' That just about says it all....that's what we all desire....and need.... Beautiful verse here! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a very beautiful verse. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ 'Your love renews my spirit' Now THAT'S what it's all about !  Lovely render of the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosepetals25, How did you manage so many heart filled lines in a short poem? Like this one: The feel of your hand Touching the side of my face Talent is what it is. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all soooo much! You kind words mean alot to me coming from such talented poets. They honestly touch my heart. Thank you. |
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