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An Ode To Us - together with "ddgoose
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An Ode To Us - together with "ddgoose |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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I must give credit where credit is due for this writing. If it were not for “ddgoose”, this poem would never have been written. I humbly thank you “dd” for your help and cooperation while writing this poem. Thank you so very much, from the bottom of my sincere heart. Bill Charles “AN ODE TO US” Do you remember when our love was fresh and new, and each moment spent together always smelled like the fresh morning dew? So tender and sweet, we longed for one another, we never even thought of being with any other. We have so many memories of laughter and fun, of vacations, beaches, and playing in the sun. We loved each other beyond our wildest fantasies, with a love we thought would last, for many centuries. We were so very young, and so foolish, and so much in love, promising each other a romance, faith, and the sky up above. I remember our innocence and a love that we idolized, and we longed for each other with troubles so few always staring lovingly into each others innocent eyes. Days spent together were filled with love and our fantasies from morning till night – working hard to make a happy family. Now the years have gone by, and all we thought we could redeem has been washed away to troubled times, and came apart in midstream. But now I am asking if this love of ours can be saved, or will I always remember the fond memories I crave? Memories are cherished gifts for two people to share, Some are made of lasting love, others of misery and despair. Many will be lost because two minds are no longer a team and so very many lost, to broken hearts and broken dreams. ddgoose Bill Charles |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Now the years have gone by, and all we thought we could redeem has been washed away to troubled times, and came apart in midstream. But now I am asking if this love of ours can be saved, or will I always remember the fond memories I crave? Memories are cherished gifts for two people to share, Some are made of lasting love, others of misery and despair. Many will be lost because two minds are no longer a team and so very many lost, to broken hearts and broken dreams. very meaninful words the two of you thank you ~~softly Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MMoonchild, Hi Maureen, I thank you for your thoughful comments about this writing that "dd" and I put together. I give most of the credit to her, as most of the words belong to her. I will also thank you from "dd". Thank you again. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
MMoonchild Thank you for your kind words. Being new to Passions, your sincerity means alot. BC: Thanks for your help and understanding. Without you, there would be no words. dd |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Bill and dd: this is bittersweet and beautiful..you make a great team! i will be on the lookout for more of your poems dd...and Bill, im always pleased after reading your work! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
poutprincess, Thank you for coming by to read this poem. I give most of the credit to "dd", as it was mostly her words that made this work possible. I too hope that "dd" asks me again to do something together. And thank you poutprincess for your kind words, I always appreciate them from you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DD and Bill~ Quite a nice piece. DD~ Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill and dd what a great work you have penned here...Write on!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bill and DD Wonderful work you have produced so beautiful yet so tenderly sad Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Marge, Thank you for coming by to read this poem. And thanks once again for your kind comments. Hello ethome, Both of us thank you for your coming by, and for your kind comments. I hope that we can do another together soon. Hi tracie66, Yes, tenderly sad it is, but "dd" has a way with words. Thank you so much for your generous comments. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... This little gem was right under my nose, but somehow escaped my mouse arrow until now!! What a beautiful thought there is here..."..will I always remember the fond memories I crave.." It's bittersweet, almost like my strawberry-rhubarb pie............... Great job, my friend, (both you and DD) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Sunny, Now, just be careful with that mouse arrow, the little kitty kat might be watching! I just love strawberry-rhubarb pie..........!! Thank you Sunny, for your so kind words. |
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