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Speaking of birds

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Seymour Tabin
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               Speaking of birds

I love most creatures that fly in the air.
They sail and they glide with abandon and flair.
They chirp and sing and flutter in their bath.
Their antics are funny, often make me laugh.

But nothing is perfect, there is always one,
That sneaks up behind, straight out of the sun.
And with sure precision he swoops from his bed,
Never missing his mark and poops on my head.

But I can forgive this statement so strong,
For we have polluted his Eden with wrong.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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Seymour~
Got me giggling with this one !
I guess paybacks are POOP, huh?

Just too cute.
~*Marge*~


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OH SY...I just love lookng at things thru your eyes...LOL
wear a hat my friend...
loved the truth in the last 2 lines...
take care, jm
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Cute poem with a bit of wisdom at the end. Do you then think the bird is 'getting back' at man for polluting his/her world? Something to think about.
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Too cute and with wisdom thrown in for good measure ... Loved this read, Sy ...


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Marge, Thank you, your right. *L*

Janet, Thank you Janet, I'll take your advise.

Poet deVine, I do believe. *L*

Pepper, Thank you so much, you are the greatest. *L*
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Never had quite that problem but they always seem to know when my car has just been washed for they always give my windshield the Midas touch.
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Perfect!  LOL

Corinne
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Sy,
A cute little poem with a punching message
Excellent! and good for some laughs
Love ya
Liz
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Septsong, I know what you mean thanks for the read.

Corinne, Glad you enjoyed.

Elizabeth, Happy you enjoyed the read.
Love ya Sy
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Sy~
this was a great read, I enjoyed it muchly. I could just picture that poop landing on top of your head (hee hee)  
Tracie~


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This is adorable, Sy! hehehehe....thanks for the laugh!!   Good message in it too!!

Denise
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Tracie66, So glad you enjoyed so you agree with the birds? *L*

Denise, Happy you enjoyed. *L*
 
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