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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-04-08 03:48 PM


Love's Quiver Zone

Cold and distant I was from you for so very long
I did not think we could still sing the same song
I thought you were the only builder of grand walls
till mine came cascading down like Niagara Falls.

It caught me by surprise this passion for you I feel
makes me desire to grab every minute I can steal
everyday pledging my love thinking you as a friend
but now this heart desires only what you can send.

I have now what there is to hold till death do us part
that one element of love that flutters my sound heart
a revelation that comes as the night I shall be alone
longing a tender touch that delivers love's quiver zone.  




[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-08-2000).]

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weaubleau
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1 posted 2000-04-08 03:56 PM


wonderful.  
i can very much relate.
i loved it.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-04-08 03:59 PM


Dreamer this is very cool and romantic..James
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3 posted 2000-04-08 07:02 PM


LostDreamer~
You delivered the quiver
with class and style.
Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-09 12:11 PM


This is beautiful, Gloria! Very well written!

Denise

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