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Maybe It's Love

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peaches_iu
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0 posted 04-02-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for peaches_iu   Email peaches_iu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peaches_iu

How can I write this
What can I say
To help you understand
What I feel everyday.
When I'm around you
Looking into your eyes
I feel like I'm in heaven
And I ask myself why.
Because of your arms
Strongly holding me near
Because of your voice
So soothing to hear
Because of your brilliance
Your deep eyes
Your soft hair
I want you to know
I will always be there.
Because of your kindness
Your warm gentle ways
Because of your smile
putting me in a daze.
The way that you act
Your style
Your charm
Your heart being one thing
I'd never try to harm.
I've tried to explain how i feel in this peom
I just wish I was with you
And not here alone.

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1 posted 04-02-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is really beautiful, Peaches! I think you have expressed it very well!!

Denise
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2 posted 04-02-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Nice job, Peaches!  Very well-written and expressed.  Hope to read more of your stuff!

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3 posted 04-02-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Welcome, Peaches! It was very well expressed.

Elizabeth


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JamesMichael
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4 posted 04-02-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice and smooth..yes maybe it is love and maybe its a friendship but it sound lovely.  James
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5 posted 04-02-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Beautiful poem!!!!!!!! ;
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-02-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I think it's love. Your feelings are written on the page, and very nicely
Liz
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7 posted 04-02-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

peaches, this poem speaks volums about your heart.  It is so wonderful to read.
Joanna



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8 posted 04-02-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

VERY LOVELY POEM!!
I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH!!
IT EXPRESSES WHAT YOU FEEL VERY WELL!!
~~~LOVE~~~
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 04-02-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Peaches~
I think perhaps you're right ...
Sounds like love to me.
~*Marge*~


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10 posted 04-03-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Billy Bolden   Email Billy Bolden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy Bolden

Just peachy, I feel the same way about someone.  Very nice work.
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