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Love's Last Breath

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Marge Tindal
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Love's Last Breath
~*Marge Tindal*~
  
Our love so alive
breathing anew
the freshness
of me loving
just you

Growing and glowing
a part of me knowing
that your love is where
I want to be

You seem to be lacking fervor
but I pull you back my way
you said you'd love
me for all time
now time is
slipping
away

The shadow of your discontent
leaves me wondering
where you went
obvious to me
that I am
left alone
in my
love

Trying to climb out of the well of you
the bucket falls time and time again
call the mortician for I believe
rigor mortis has set in




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 03-11-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

hehe. No rigor mortis in you, Marge! You've got more spunk and life in you than any three women I know. I envy the man who can share it  


The poem is excellent, btw.
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Balladeer~
LOL !
I thank you for that!
You know me ... this is just one of those
'somebody-out-there-needs-it' poems.
Still loving you, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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This is so wonderful, Marge! I love it!

Denise
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Denise~
I just love it when you are 'everywhere'.
Thanks for dropping in on me.
~*Marge Tindal*~



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Hi Marge,

Hey is this why I am so stiff lately??
RIGOR MORTIS
I am glad I found the answer Doctor Lovely

Cerenity
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Super Marge  
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Cerenity~
If it has no pulse -
chances are it's a goner.
~*Dr.Lovely*~  

Hoot~
Thanks again, lady.
~*Marge*~





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Another gem Marge!

Marina
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Another well-crafted masterpiece!

 Nathan
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Marina~
Thank you for liking.

Nate~
You please this friend with your comment.
~*Marge*~



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Well, dear Marge, just make sure it ain't you at the bottom of the well!  Let him be the stiff one, so to speak!  

Corinne
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Corinne~

's  and more   's

~*Marge*~



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Marge....why is it you amaze me each time I read???....I must be a slow learner...lol Once again a great one!!
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Lovely but sad, Marge.  I liked the formating...I think it adds to the experience.

INclan
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ButterfliesDC~
I hope that what I write always amazes you.
Thank you for letting me know.
I ALWAYS appreciate your read and your comments, my friend.

INclan~
Lonely and sad would be a love where only one was still in it, for sure.
Thank you for the comment on the format.
I just love to 'play' with the words.
Glad to know it's appreciated.
~*Marge*~


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Marge...I don't think I have to even tell you...I loved it.  (of course!!!)

Excellent piece.

Chris

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ChrisG~
I just visited your home page ...
of course you don't have to tell me ...
but I'm glad you did.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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This was great Marge...I'm sure many out there will need this one...but then again, spring is in the air!! Lovely m'dear!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Devina~
And you, my little one ...
are a fresh breath of spring.
I'm glad you're here.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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