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Right And Wrong and not quite poetry

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MyPenNameIsSam
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0 posted 03-08-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

As always... in rough draft form...

Right and Wrong and not quite poetry
9/12/99

The world in which we live
     surrounded by our souls
Perceiving eachother as right or wrong
     rather than good or confused
Confusion being neither good nor bad
     but definetly not positive
     an ailment of sorts
Our souls specifically telling us what is right
Our mind's dissecting the information
     until it is wrong
Bringing chaos and confusion to
     our humble lives
Confusing good for evil
     and evil as good
Back and forth
     until our over-all perception
     of all things is confused
Upsetting the subtle balance between
     right and wrong
     good and bad...
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Cerenity
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1 posted 03-08-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi MyPenNameIsSam,

WOW this is so true in life we do this to our selves loosing all clear thought, I think it's because we don't want to up set the people in our lives.

Very insightful poem,
Thank you,

Cerenity
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2 posted 03-08-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Aaahhh....tis true!  We spend so much of our time pointing fingers and judging, that we lose sight of the good in ourselves and others!  We do tend to take something small and twist it in such a way, we create a monster!  LOL  Very interesting concept you have here Sam!  Thanks for sharing!
Martie
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Very interesting poem--
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