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I'm Giving Kisses Away
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I'm Giving Kisses Away |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I'm Giving Kisses Away ~*Marge Tindal*~ You came without warning into my morning now I'm giving kisses away The smile on your face holds me in place I'm giving kisses away The mesmerize of your eyes caught my heart in sweet surprise I'm sending kisses your way The budding romance within your glance has me totally entranced gathering kisses at play I can simply surmise the look in your eyes is one of surprise when at sun's first peek a kiss finds its way to rest on your cheek I'm sending kisses your way ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, here is yet another beautiful poem by you. It is very sweet. Sounds like you are in love? I always enjoy the presentation of your poems and of course I love the poems too. Well, I am sending applause your way!! Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Good morning Miss Ultra Cheerful Marge...LOL You conjure up a garden in full bloom..Good for you.. HUSG I dropped a tear in the ocean when it is found, I will stop loving you... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm sure you'll have tons of men waiting in line for them too Such a cute poem |
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busylisa_ca Junior Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 39 |
Cute poem. Kisses all around is a wonderful and warm feeling to send to people. from busylisa  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Kisses are the greatest things...i love the thought behind this and the repetition of phrases. Beautiful kisses for some lucky man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww...this is a favorite...it's great! You seem to be a loving, caring, playful person, like me. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, My, what a feeling of enraptured bliss one sees in reading this. Wonderful work, Marge. Leaves someone like me with a measure of hope! Michael |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
Marge: very sweet. I had a poetry teacher once who would circle all adverbs with a red pen and we were supposed to strike them out. Don't know how you feel about leaving out "totally" or "simply", but he sure would! best wishes, bboog |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a wonderful well written happy poem Marge. Is this going to be a kissing booth or do you only have one special man in mind? (laugh) James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so sweet Marge, I can see them lining up for kisses from here. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
(jumping up and down excitedly waving his hand high in the air...) "ME FIRST!!!" "ME FIRST!!!" LOL Wonderfully sweet poem Marge...as always. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem, Marge! Blow some poetry skills my way please! Nathan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Simple and heartfelt Marge...I believe you had me drooling on my keyboard with this one!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
When the line forms for those kisses I'll be there. Your work is automatic read for me. How's that for a compliment?????? Danny |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My definition of bliss is Receiving your kisses Oh, what a great thrill that would be. I'd wave bye to all stress With but one sweet caress And my world would be happy and free. At the first kiss I'd smile At the way you beguile With the second, I'd feel a big grin On the third I would flush On the fourth feel a rush With the fifth, I'd be thinking of sin. Number six would delight me And seven ignite me Number eight...I would dial 9-1-1 Number nine, I'd be numb Number ten I would come To the end of my poem. This was fun! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I'm ALWAYS in love ! Thanks, girlfriend ! RainbowGirl~ Spring is the time for those lovely gardens in bloom. Thank you, gal. Hoot~ LOL ! You mean I may need reinforcements? VOLUNTEERS ? BusyLisa~ Glad you enjoyed. JML~ Yeah, aren't they? PassingShadows~ I'm gonna take that personally ! Thank you, lady. Michael~ Sweetheart, you've got HIGH HOPE going for you. BB~ Nah! I simply don't think so! James~ SHARING ! Martie~ Of course I knew you'd like ! ChrisG~ LOL @ 'ME FIRST' Bring it on ! Nate~ Thanks .... and consider it done ! Poof ! Devina~ LOL @ 'drooling'. Thanks, gal. Danny~ That works for me ! Balla-deere~ On a scale of 1-10 ... you just scored a 10 ! Cute as heck reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another lovely one, Marge! I love it!! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Yeah ... I'd have figured that out ! You are a super lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful...that's the only word that describes this piece and somehow one word seems enough. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Awwwwwwwww ! What a wonderful response. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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