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I'm Giving Kisses Away

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Marge Tindal
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I'm Giving Kisses Away
~*Marge Tindal*~


You came without warning
into my morning
now I'm giving kisses away

The smile on your face
holds me in place
I'm giving kisses away

The mesmerize
of your eyes
caught my heart
in sweet surprise
I'm sending kisses your way

The budding romance
within your glance
has me totally entranced
gathering kisses at play

I can simply surmise
the look in your eyes
is one of surprise
when at sun's first peek
a kiss finds its way
to rest on your cheek
I'm sending kisses your way





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Honeybee
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1 posted 03-06-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee



Marge, here is yet another beautiful poem by you.  It is very sweet.  Sounds like you are in love?  I always enjoy the presentation of your poems and of course I love the poems too. Well, I am sending applause your way!!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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2 posted 03-06-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Good morning Miss Ultra Cheerful Marge...LOL

You conjure up a garden in full bloom..Good for you..

HUSG

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...
hoot_owl_rn
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I'm sure you'll have tons of men waiting in line for them too   Such a cute poem  
busylisa_ca
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4 posted 03-06-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

Cute poem.  Kisses all around is a wonderful and warm feeling to send to people.

from busylisa
PoeticKnight
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5 posted 03-06-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Kisses are the greatest things...i love the thought behind this and the repetition of phrases. Beautiful kisses for some lucky man.
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6 posted 03-06-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awwww...this is a favorite...it's great! You seem to be a loving, caring, playful person, like me.  
Michael
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7 posted 03-06-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Oh, My, what a feeling of enraptured bliss one sees in reading this.  Wonderful work, Marge.  Leaves someone like me with a measure of hope!


Michael
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8 posted 03-06-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for bboog   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bboog's Home Page   View IP for bboog

Marge: very sweet. I had a poetry teacher once who would circle all adverbs with a red pen and we were supposed to strike them out. Don't know how you feel about leaving out "totally" or "simply", but he sure would!
best wishes,
bboog
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9 posted 03-06-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is a wonderful well written happy poem Marge.   Is this going to be a kissing booth or do you only have one special man in mind? (laugh)  James
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10 posted 03-06-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so sweet Marge, I can see them lining up for kisses from here.
CMGrimm
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11 posted 03-06-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

(jumping up and down excitedly waving his hand high in the air...)
"ME FIRST!!!"
"ME FIRST!!!"

LOL


Wonderfully sweet poem Marge...as always.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Nate Dogg
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12 posted 03-06-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful poem, Marge! Blow some poetry skills my way please!

 Nathan
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13 posted 03-06-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Simple and heartfelt Marge...I believe you had me drooling on my keyboard with this one!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Danny Holloway
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14 posted 03-06-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

When the line forms for those kisses I'll be there.
Your work is automatic read for me. How's that for a compliment??????
Danny
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My definition of bliss is
Receiving your kisses
Oh, what a great thrill that would be.
I'd wave bye to all stress
With but one sweet caress
And my world would be happy and free.

At the first kiss I'd smile
At the way you beguile
With the second, I'd feel a big grin
On the third I would flush
On the fourth feel a rush
With the fifth, I'd be thinking of sin.

Number six would delight me
And seven ignite me
Number eight...I would dial 9-1-1
Number nine, I'd be numb
Number ten I would come
To the end of my poem. This was fun!  

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 03-06-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Melissa~
I'm ALWAYS in love !  Thanks, girlfriend !

RainbowGirl~
Spring is the time for those lovely
gardens in bloom.  Thank you, gal.

Hoot~
LOL !  You mean I may need reinforcements?
VOLUNTEERS ?

BusyLisa~
Glad you enjoyed.

JML~
Yeah, aren't they?

PassingShadows~
I'm gonna take that personally !
Thank you, lady.

Michael~
Sweetheart, you've got HIGH HOPE
going for you.  

BB~
Nah!  I simply don't think so!


James~
SHARING !

Martie~
Of course I knew you'd like !  

ChrisG~
LOL @ 'ME FIRST'
Bring it on !

Nate~
Thanks .... and consider it done !
Poof !

Devina~
LOL @ 'drooling'.
Thanks, gal.

Danny~
That works for me !

Balla-deere~
On a scale of 1-10 ...
you just scored a 10 !
Cute as heck reply.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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17 posted 03-06-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another lovely one, Marge! I love it!!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-06-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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Denise~
Yeah ... I'd have figured that out !  
You are a super lady.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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19 posted 03-07-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Beautiful...that's the only word that describes this piece and somehow one word seems enough.
Marge Tindal
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ButterfliesDC~
Awwwwwwwww !  What a wonderful response.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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