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I Made A Wish And You Came True
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I Made A Wish And You Came True |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Made A Wish And You Came True ~*Marge Tindal*~ I had only to say the words to make you a reality. And now that we with love, are blessed, of all my wishes come true, I really like you best. You are my up when I would be down my smile when I might otherwise frown. You light up my life with a smile having dwelt within my heart all the while. I made a wish and you came true. I knew it from the start. For all the times I've wished, you lived within my heart. I just may love you forever if that's okay with you. Until time as we know it passes and knowing that it's okay, I think I'm gonna love you 'til time slips away. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Somehow, with a few words you are always able to bring a smile to my lips Marge - "You are my up when I would be down" isn't that what it's all about? I think a person to compliment you is what we all search for! Well done and may everyone be granted their wishes for a love like this! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge Whoever you wrote this for is a very special person indeed, this was just lovely my friend  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christopher~ You have just put the 'good-night kiss' on my day with your lovely comments. If I can give just one smile ... I've done all I set out to do today. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie, hon~ You slipped in there as I was posting. Thank you ... it's for every special somebody in someone's life. I've sure got some special somebody's to which it applies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I stand envious of the feeling you portray in this poem. A beautiful and heart-warming work. Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know me Marge(y) and while I agree that this is lovely I stand back and wonder if such a thing is truly possible. This little heart mired in doubt can't yet believe in the truth of it. Lovely writing my friend. Kammies 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is romantic stuff Marge and I like it. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ My heart thanks you. Kamla~ Oh, 'little heart mired in doubt' the truths will someday find you out. Pick you up and set you down in someone's dream of love. The truth you'll see believingly ... then there'll be no doubt. (I notice you said 'yet') James~ Romantic ... yep. I believe in it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, Marge, I made a wish to read beautiful poetry this morning, and you made it come true with your poem. I loved this one. You speak of love so perfectly. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one brought a smile to my face "I think I'm gonna love you 'til time slips away." Now that's love!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You delight me with your responses. Glad you had a wish come true. Thank you ... Hoot~ Now leave it to you to pick out what is also my favorite thought in this poem. Doesn't surprise me ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Enjoyed the read of this very much. *L* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like "wishcraft" to me. I stand in line with the rest of the envious. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Thank you, love. Serenity~ 'Wishcraft' .. how adorable ! Thank you for the smile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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warrior Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 11 |
well maiden....another stroke of the pen another treasured story....the glen beckons |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhh ! My ~Warrior~ How treasured to see you among this circle of friends. I smile. Love ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, yes! Those special someones are what makes life worth living! Beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Yes ... special indeed. Thanks again for being YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge, You captured the give and take of love as well as the completion of one's self when true love is found. You have an amazing talent, I feel blessed to have the chance to read your work. Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Welcome to the Passion's family. Thank you for your nice compliments. I love sharing the feelings of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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