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jascanvey
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since 12-26-1999
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0 posted 03-01-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jascanvey



Write me a poem, he says
Let me know what you feel
But where should I start
And will he take it for real?

He's sweet and he's warm
He's kind and he's true
It's so easy to say
I've found a new friend in you.

He smiles at my humour
He frowns when I'm sad
Sends red roses to cheer me
From the week that I've had.

Now the housework's forgotten
And the dogs feel ignored
But without him on-line
I'm incredibly bored.

We spend hours chatting
About the thoughts in our head
And I hate to tell him
That it's time for my bed.

He knows all my secrets
Shares my hopes and my fears
Has it been just a short time?
Feels like I've known you for years.

He knows just what to say
To put a smile on my face
Wants so much to meet me
But has respect for my haste.

He's honest and patient
Wont push me too fast
And I've got to admit
I hope this friendship will last.

~Julie~




 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.

[This message has been edited by jascanvey (edited 03-01-2000).]
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Parker
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since 01-06-2000
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... the old black rum


1 posted 03-01-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Julie,  Its very nice to make friendships online. This is a wonderful poem. I hope it lasts. We all need to make good friendships.
Online distance means nothing.


Parker
jascanvey
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Posts 130
England


2 posted 03-03-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

James - thanks for popping in! He liked the poem too! Sometimes it's nice to chat to a stranger about your hopes and fears. This was just a little ditty to let him know I appreciate it!  

 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 03-03-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Julie, this is really sweet and from the heart. How could he not like it? I just hope it lasts a long time for you too  
just_another_fe
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since 02-05-2000
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MICHIGAN


4 posted 03-03-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

YAY JULIE!!!! *HUGZ*  IS THIS THAT GUY THAT SAID HE WANTED TO MEET YOU OF ICQ??? COOL GOOD LUCK GIRL AND ITS A GOOD POEM  
Denise
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5 posted 03-04-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Julie! I enjoyed this very much!  

Denise
RufffRyder
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Posts 191
<------Over There------>


6 posted 03-04-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Excellent writing here.
I can relate to this one as Im sure many others online can.
Meeting someone online gives both parties a chance to get to know eachother in a much different way than you were to meet in a bar or else where.
Thank you for the read....NOW GO PLAY WITH YOUR DOGS   j/k

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


7 posted 03-04-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is a nice poem from your heart.  Yes it is really nice to have friends...I hope for the best for both of you.   James
jascanvey
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England


8 posted 03-04-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

hoot_owl, dsnyder, James - thanks for taking time to comment, much appreciated.

Angie - no, a different one! I'll mail you more information!!

RuffRyder - LOL, dogs aren't really ignored! Terribly spoilt in fact!! Glad you liked it.  

 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.
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