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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Holes In such places as life and living there are the contemplated depths- voids that cry for fill… In the connected seas there must be such a hole, for they never run over… and- in the segregated me's a cavernous pit exists which I appreciate may not ever be occupied….. but I have to try. Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Robert!  Denise |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Yes, this is excellent! It is stated simply, but is actually quite profound. Now I keep asking myself why I have not run into your talent and others in this Forum in others that I post in. Kim |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ Quite a 'thinker' this is. Enjoyed muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Robert quite simple but at the same time very deep...I liked it very much tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Much said in a few words Robert |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
This is awesome, really made me think. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great and meaningful little poem. I like it a lot Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks you guys....and some new guys at that! I just cannot do long poems....I try and run out of steam. I guess sometimes it is best to let things be as they are. Robert |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very expressive! I like your work, it's thoughtful and full of imagery. I don't think the length of a poem has anything to do with whether or not it's good. Remember size doesn't matter..heart does..  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Left me in thought.... Wonderful Robert !!!!! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed this piece, as I have all your work that I have read. Especially like your creative phrasings...you've a way of expression that's very unique. ("contemplated depths"..."segregated me's"). And always we must try, I must agree. ~ Claire |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
again, thanks....I really appreciate all your wonderful words. It helps me believe in myself. |
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