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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Springtime When I walk within the sun tomorrow The rays will reach and warm my skin, I will savor the radiance with delight as each second is like a heartbeat pulsating it's way to springtime. |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Lost Dreamer - I just can't wait for spring to get here, your poem makes it seem as though it's here already. Thanks |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~lost dreamer you got spring fever too huh lol. this was a lovely poem about a lovely season. i loved the last stanza especially. as always, wonderful work amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
*smelling the Daphne...watching the tulips and daffodils break the ground* I can't WAIT!!! Thanks for the spring cheer admist a gloomy winter day... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think we are all coming down with a wonderful case of Spring Fever!! This is beautiful, Gloria!  Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A beautiful poem about the anticipation of spring. Nicely done, dreamer |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank You all very much for your warm compliments, tomorrow is here and the sun is bright and beautiful, but old man winter still lingers in the breeze. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, I am so ready for spring |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Everybody is talking about spring, its still a long way for me up here atleast two months. Parker |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This poem felt as the sun upon my face. Thank you, Gloria for for a warming moment. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth: I've been ready for a long time, thanks for reading. Parker: Sorry to hear that, it may not fully be hear yet either, I think just a tease right now, but I will take it knowing it's not long away I hope, thanks for reading and replying and i hope you warm up soon where you are at. Michael: I'm glad my words could reflect upon you like the sun, that's a wonderful compliment to receive, I thank you very much. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
This poem filled me, quite literally with the joys of spring. For me this beautiful season signifies a new era, a re-birth for all life. A time to shrug off regrets and start anew. A beatutiful poem. Thankyou.  |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Oh, how I do love spring. It brings out the best of me, ya know. Or is that the worst? I can't remember. Anticipation you have instilled in me Lost Dreamer. Green is what I long to see, flowers I long to smell...I get giggly just thinking about it! Thank you! Chinese fortune cookie say: There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A short but very sweet poem. Sometimes less really is more. Your poem is very unique, I especially loved the last few lines "as each second is like a heartbeat, pulsating it's way to springtime." Reading your poem has me anticipating Spring's arrival even more. Thanks for the good read. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Your poem had me searching my yard for that first robin. A true sign that spring has arrived. I wait, gazing out the window.. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Great poem about one of my favorite seasons! |
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