How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 Springtime
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Springtime

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
Normal, Illinois


0 posted 02-28-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Springtime

When I walk within the sun
tomorrow
The rays will reach and warm my
skin,
I will savor the radiance with
delight
as each second is like a
heartbeat
pulsating it's way to
springtime.
© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 02-04-2000
Posts 2942
New York, USA


1 posted 02-28-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Lost Dreamer - I just can't wait for spring to get here, your poem makes it seem as though it's here already.  Thanks
Aimster
Member Elite
since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 02-28-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~lost dreamer

you got spring fever too huh lol. this was a lovely poem about a lovely season. i loved the last stanza especially. as always, wonderful work

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Breathe~
Member
since 02-05-2000
Posts 319
Washington...


3 posted 02-28-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

*smelling the Daphne...watching the tulips and daffodils break the ground*

I can't WAIT!!!  Thanks for the spring cheer admist a gloomy winter day...


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


4 posted 02-28-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think we are all coming down with a wonderful case of Spring Fever!! This is beautiful, Gloria!  

Denise
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


5 posted 02-28-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A beautiful poem about the anticipation of spring. Nicely done, dreamer  
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
Normal, Illinois


6 posted 02-29-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Thank You all very much for your warm compliments, tomorrow is here and the sun is bright and beautiful, but old man winter still lingers in the breeze.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


7 posted 02-29-2000 11:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, I am so ready for spring  
Parker
Member Elite
since 01-06-2000
Posts 3135
... the old black rum


8 posted 02-29-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Everybody is talking about spring, its still a long way for me up here atleast two months.

Parker
Michael
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


9 posted 02-29-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This poem felt as the sun upon my face.  Thank you, Gloria for for a warming moment.


Michael
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
Normal, Illinois


10 posted 03-01-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Ruth: I've been ready for a long time, thanks for reading.

Parker: Sorry to hear that, it may not fully be hear yet either, I think just a tease right now, but I will take it knowing it's not long away I hope, thanks for reading and replying and i hope you warm up soon where you are at.

Michael: I'm glad my words could reflect upon you like the sun, that's a wonderful compliment to receive, I thank you very much.
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


11 posted 03-02-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This poem filled me, quite literally with the joys of spring.
For me this beautiful season signifies a new era, a re-birth for all life.
A time to shrug off regrets and start anew.
A beatutiful poem.
Thankyou.      
sonjes
Senior Member
since 02-18-2000
Posts 573
North Carolina


12 posted 03-02-2000 07:16 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Oh, how I do love spring.  It brings out the best of me, ya know.  Or is that the worst?  I can't remember.
Anticipation you have instilled in me Lost Dreamer.  Green is what I long to see, flowers I long to smell...I get giggly just thinking about it!  Thank you!

 Chinese fortune cookie say:
There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you.
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 12-26-1999
Posts 5512
Ontario, CANADA


13 posted 03-02-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee



A short but very sweet poem.  Sometimes less really is more. Your poem is very unique, I especially loved the last few lines "as each second is like a heartbeat, pulsating it's way to springtime."  Reading your poem has me anticipating Spring's arrival even more.  Thanks for the good read.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
kitkat
Senior Member
since 01-11-2000
Posts 892
Nova Scotia


14 posted 03-02-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Your poem had me searching my yard for that first robin. A true sign that spring has arrived. I wait, gazing out the window..
Songbird
Member Elite
since 12-15-1999
Posts 2211
California


15 posted 03-02-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Great poem about one of my favorite seasons!
Lost Dreamer will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> Springtime Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors