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It Was A Fantasy Dream...
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It Was A Fantasy Dream... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Love escapes that fantasy dream, I’ve held for many a years- Drown out by my solitude, Filled with a mountain of tears. No longer do I hope of dreams, Or wish upon those stars- For yesterday hid my love- With your ever -bitter remarks. No longer do I fear alone Or wish for two of a kind- This heart knows too much pain- And reasoning escapes my mind. To fill the void of love’s despair, I’ll reap this storm of pain- Wrap arms safely about myself- Throughout this rugged terrain. So hurt me no further, When I cannot be enough- Leave me be this time- So much for dreams of love. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very well said, I know this well....great writing sweet friend...sighs and hugs too! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
The image of wrapping one's arms safely 'round oneself was positively brilliant, devina. I have been here ... --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very well written Devina. I have been questioning some of my relationships lately, are they real or only a fantasy? James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina~ as I echo the above....this is great!  -SEA |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
devina I know exactly how you feel. This is how I felt after leaving my ex-fiancee. But time heals the wounds we never thought would. Marina |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Alright - I guess it's my turn to try and "heal" you. devina, you are a very soft and sensitive person. People take advantage of this type for whatever selfish reasons but that's not reason to change. There is a beauty to your openess of heart...and believe me, there is nothing but grief awaiting when you close that off. Never stop dreaming, devina...what purpose to life would their be without it? Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, your such a precious soul. There is a truer love out there for you... or maybe in here...  Come and visit Toronto, I'll show you the CN Tower... Its the largest free standing structure in the world... for some reason women just stand around it just staring... must be a women thing. xoxoxoxo Parker |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Corozon- thanks hun...I needed that hug on a day like today!!!! Kess-Sometimes these two arms are the best comfort in the world!! James- I think the really good ones are fantasy, and they usually end too soon!! SEA- And I thank you as well!!! Marina- Yah, I know what you mean, but sometimes "time" is the wound... Michael- I think you're much better at cheering me up than I am with you...see...I'm smiling... I'll keep dreaming...but I can't garauntee you that it'll work!! Thanks for the friendship dear!!!James-You come and get me hun, and it's a deal...I'm terrible with directions!!! And thank you sweetheart for always encouraging me....XXOO Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugs and sniffles from your self-proclaimed sister...know that a candle has been lit for you, friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Now, girlfriend ... with all the 'volunteers' standing in line with a *hug* ... spread those arms open wide and share a *hug*. Be all you can be .... I like your *SMILE* ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Dreams don't die Devina. . . we kill them. . . they will always survive within us. . . Let your heart sing Devina. . . I know its song. . .share it with me, with us. .. we long to hear it. . . And, on your way to Toronto, stop off here in Michigan for a visit. . . you'd really like it here. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Keep your hope and keep chasing your dreams, Devina. They will come true if you truly believe. Exellent poem. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
serentiy- I do believe you're more than self- proclaimed m'dear...we have a bond, me and you...and thank you for the kind thought!!! Marge- I always love your hugs hun...I feel much better...really!!! XO Sven- I believe it's just your lovely music that you're hearing...but I thank you sweetie for the cheering up!!! And Sven...I'm sure Michigan would be nice too!! Alwye- I thank you dear...dreams, I guess I might still have a few!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"The old dreams were good dreams they didn't ever happen but I'm glad I had them". This line was from "Bridges of Madison county". Keep those dreams my dear, one never knows what awaits the next heartbeat. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice poem Devina |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sad again but so well written is this poem you done I'm very possitive and certain "There got to be someone" Your heart should not be broken, that much I do know Well done sweet The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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