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Open Poetry #6

Proceed (a repost)

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-02-23 05:39 PM

I'm very sorry that I haven't posted much lately. I lost my poem notebook so I'm just compiling a new one. Expect to see a diferent side to me soon because I'll be writing with meters and I'll be broadening my appeal too.

As I proceed
to plant seeds
in the earth,
I'll remember it
for all that it's worth.
I'm so proud to be sound
and profound
about the found.
My wife is my happiness, my pride, and my joy.
She's also the mother of my baby boy.
In the future,we would like to have a baby girl.
It would be a great addition to our happy world.
Thank you Lord, for overseeing
our process through life as human beings.
And thank you Lord,
for giving me
the knowledge to see,
all that I can be
in order to proceed.

Nathan

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-02-23 08:19 PM

Thank you, Nathan, for a glimpse into (dare I
type it?) serenity. Think I'll shut down now
and go to enjoy my own. Thanks for the reminder.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-24 10:28 PM

This is one of my favorites of yours, Nate!
Very beautiful!

Denise

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-02-27 02:41 PM

Thank you Dysnder and serenity for those sweet comments.

Nathan

RufffRyder
Member

since 2000-02-25

Posts 143
<------Over There------>

4 posted 2000-02-27 02:59 PM

It`s very refreshing to see poetry that reflects happiness.
I can see that your a proud husband and father.
RIGHT ON!!!
Thank`s for the read and smile`s.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-27 03:23 PM

Nice poetry Nate. It looks like you are on the right path. James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2000-03-01 03:58 PM

Thank you for the nice comments.

Nathan

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