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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2000-02-23 01:10 AM

You said your love
had no end
you said you'd always be
my very best friend

But something changed
or maybe it died
or maybe it was
that you lied

For whatever the reason
no matter the excuse
don't try to explain
there's just no use

You broke my heart
every possible way
our "forever"
ended today.
-SEA-

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-02-23 01:21 AM

Forever always seems to end way to soon. But then, there always seems to be another forever within reach too.

Hopefully a true one's out there for everyone.

Michael

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

2 posted 2000-02-23 01:21 AM

wow sea this is great. i completly understand your feelings in this poem.i to believe that my whatever you wanna call him lied when he said "i love you". today was my first day with out him. last night i let it go. our "forever" ended today

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-02-23 01:27 AM

Michael~ I agree, thanks for reading

j_a_f~ I read your poem, I hope you stay strong! This is for my "best friend" I have been trying to stay in contact with him. I guess it just isn't going to happen. My Mom told me today to just let go. Hurts, but I think I have to. My relationship with my husband is strong and wonderful. He is my everything.

-SEA

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-02-23 02:04 AM

Strong emotion, here, Sea. I do admire the
strength of your conviction. Bravo!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-23 06:27 AM

I think sometimes we all move to fast and we meet someone new and say we will love them forever and six months later you are wondering what the heck happened. I think the answer is to start out as friends and thats probably where most relationships should stay. James

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-02-23 07:13 AM

SEA~
Sorry for the hurt you feel.
Just leave the door open.

Perhaps there are reasons, not excuses.

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2000-02-23 11:20 AM

Serenity~ Thanks!

James~ya, my husband and I started out friends when I was 14.

Marge~thank you.Unfortunately for my heart, that door will always be open. It always is for the people I love.

-SEA

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

8 posted 2000-02-24 01:11 AM

This was sad SEA, I can see your strength pouring from this one!!!! Very well put...time only knows how many hearts have been broken!!! Hang in there girl!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Sara
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since 2000-02-24

Posts 27
LaCrosse WI, United States

9 posted 2000-02-24 01:21 AM

Hey SEA,
I could really relate to the poem. I think we had similar experiences. It gets easier, but it never goes away, at least not for me. Wonderful poem.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2000-02-24 01:34 AM

Devina and Sara~thanks!
I got a call tonight from my friend.YAAAAAA!!!

Looks like our"forever" is still strong. Thank God. We talked for about 2 hours. I really needed it.(Prayers heard.)

-SEA

jeremyc
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 18

11 posted 2000-02-24 06:29 AM

wow...such a sad poem...but nonetheless it is well written...i hope you find someone better than him soon

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2000-02-24 06:33 AM

SEA~
See ..... friendship lives !
I'm so happy for you.
SMILE
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2000-02-24 12:07 PM

Great poem, SEA... and I rejoice at your good news!!! Yippee!!! Just keep those doors open and the welcome mat out. *S*

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

14 posted 2000-02-24 12:16 PM

Ooh, stong and can feel the hurt. I like this one!

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

15 posted 2000-02-24 01:09 PM

Words with such sting
Can only mean one thing...
This subject is something you can feel,
And hence, in writing, you begin to heal.

I liked this one, SEA,
and unfortunately,
understand it well.

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