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I'll Love You "Forever"

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SEA
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0 posted 02-23-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


You said your love
had no end
you said you'd always be
my very best friend

But something changed
or maybe it died
or maybe it was
that you lied

For whatever the reason
no matter the excuse
don't try to explain
there's just no use

You broke my heart
every possible way
our "forever"
ended today.
-SEA-
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1 posted 02-23-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Forever always seems to end way to soon.  But then, there always seems to be another forever within reach too.     Hopefully a true one's out there for everyone.


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wow sea this is great. i completly understand your feelings in this poem.i to believe that my whatever you wanna call him lied when he said "i love you". today was my first day with out him. last night i let it go. our "forever" ended today  
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3 posted 02-23-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Michael~ I agree, thanks for reading

j_a_f~ I read your poem, I hope you stay strong! This is for my "best friend" I have been trying to stay in contact with him. I guess it just isn't going to happen. My Mom told me today to just let go. Hurts, but I think I have to. My relationship with my husband is strong and wonderful. He is my everything. -SEA
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4 posted 02-23-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Strong emotion, here, Sea.  I do admire the
strength of your conviction.  Bravo!
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I think sometimes we all move to fast and we meet someone new and say we will love them forever and six months later you are wondering what the heck happened.   I think the answer is to start out as friends and thats probably where most relationships should stay.   James
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SEA~
Sorry for the hurt you feel.
Just leave the door open.

Perhaps there are reasons, not excuses.

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 02-23-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Serenity~ Thanks!  

James~ya, my husband and I started out friends when I was 14.

Marge~thank you.Unfortunately for my heart, that door will always be open. It always is for the people I love.
-SEA
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This was sad SEA, I can see your strength pouring from this one!!!! Very well put...time only knows how many hearts have been broken!!! Hang in there girl!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Hey SEA,
I could really relate to the poem.  I think we had similar experiences.  It gets easier, but it never goes away, at least not for me. Wonderful poem.
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10 posted 02-24-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Devina and Sara~thanks!
I got a call tonight from my friend.YAAAAAA!!! Looks like our"forever" is still strong. Thank God. We talked for about 2 hours. I really needed it.(Prayers heard.) -SEA

                  
                    
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wow...such a sad poem...but nonetheless it is well written...i hope you find someone better than him soon
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SEA~
See ..... friendship lives !
I'm so happy for you.
SMILE      
~*Marge*~


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Great poem, SEA... and I rejoice at your good news!!! Yippee!!! Just keep those doors open and the welcome mat out. *S*
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Ooh, stong and can feel the hurt. I like this one!
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15 posted 02-24-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Words with such sting
Can only mean one thing...
This subject is something you can feel,
And hence, in writing, you begin to heal.

I liked this one, SEA,
and unfortunately,
understand it well.
 
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