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Longing
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Longing These eyes longing to see your face look into your eyes, your soul, to know These ears longing to hear your voice whispers of love, your dreams, to know These lips longing to kiss yours to kiss your softness, so tender, to know These arms longing for your warm embrace to feel you close, breathing, to know This heart longing to beat with yours to be in harmony, as one, to know To know as eternal souls can know that Love is all there is, ...........it is enough! |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
I'm longing to feel what you are trying to deliver, very nice poem! I hope that you don't have to long for her much longer.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny...what can I say? This was absolutely beautiful. Oh, to only have that kind of love where some one loves you as much as you they....sigh. Nice poem  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A beautiful portayal of the 'secret' place in the heart. Left me feeling haunted and hungry for I-don't-know-what. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Very nice Danny..solid construction, and full of emotion I can easily identify with. Good job! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Danny! So lovely! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny, I don't know what to say..that could bring a tear to a glass eye. Beautiful. Marina |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Danny, I felt the feel, I longed the longing,I know what you mean, and you said it beautifully Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Danny, this is lovely in mood and I know my heart has felt this same way and you have written it just the way it is. Wonderful! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a lovely poem that I am sure many - even most - can relate to... Well done. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Excellent Danny! Silly I know, but when reading this it feels like a big hug, the kind that makes you feel all warm and loved. Great Job! It's beautiful. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Danny, Just remember that longing is often worth your time m'friend...you'll always know that in the end!!! Well said!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ I feel the romance in your words. 'To know as eternal souls can know that Love is all there is, ...........it is enough! What a wonderful truth. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Many thanks to all the members of my fan club for all the wonderful comments. An autographed picture of me is in the mail to each of you. Oh yes, your membership dues are overdue!(ha) Thanks again, Danny |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ autographed picture! *G* Count me in, Danny... this is wonderful! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny: I do hope this picture of you will be of a revealing nature...of your personality of course. Marina |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Danny~ Simple and not. I like the sentiment behind the words. Nicely displayed in structure, too. GOOD JOB! |
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