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two new haiku

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Beki
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haiku 003

after the long rains
sweet music in these caverns -
morning's waterfalls.

haiku 004

on the beach
dawnlight spreads from gull to gull -
I sip my tea.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 02-22-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

haiku 001 & haiku 002 ???????????????????
I envy your location (beach)!
Ah, to sip tea as the sun comes up on distant ocean horizon...lucky lady!
Danny
Janet Marie
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2 posted 02-22-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

these are great...we use to do these in a poetry workshop I took...they are a lot harder than they seem..you made it look easy
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
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your my inspiration, your my fire...
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Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
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I love you, always.*

Beki
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3 posted 02-23-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Danny, I will email you 001 and 002  posted here last month  

Janet, thanks..you're right, much more to it then it seems. I studied extensively for 2 years before I really tried to write it...still learning  
 
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