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I'm blue
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I'm blue |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Iam blue, There is noone to talk to me, But I don't mind, I feel they don't need me, I'm blue and I'm sad, I need someone to talk to me, I feel there's something wrong with me, But I know it's not true, Cause I look fine, And I can do things if I cry, cause I know there's nothing, wrong with me, I'll hold my head high, And say I can do it, there's nothing wrong with me, let people say what they want, I'm lonely and I'm blue |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You've expressed so well how it is to be sad and feeling alone...do keep writing! Claire |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Have you heard that song, "blue"? Just curious...it drives me crazy, seems to be full of nonsense, but catchy all the same, this tune. Very desolate poem here, Vandana. I hope you find some cheer within that will have you writing in more colors than one really soon!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now little Ms. VanDana Blue is a lovely color when you wear it, not when you bear it. Love is the pink of the blush on the cheeks with a heart-felt flush. Green is the shade of a new friend made. Hello FRIEND I hope your heart finds a RAINBOW again. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vandana soo sad  but cheer up we're talking to you  Marge as usual you put a smile on everyone's face great reply I loved it. HUGS to Vandana and a  |
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