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I'm blue

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vandana
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0 posted 02-22-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Iam blue,
There is noone to talk to me,
But I don't mind,
I feel they don't need me,
I'm blue and I'm sad,
I need someone to talk to me,
I feel there's something wrong with me,
But I know it's  not true,
Cause I look fine,
And I can do things if I cry,
cause I know there's nothing,
wrong with me,
I'll hold my head high,
And say I can do it,
there's nothing wrong with me,
let people say what they want,
I'm lonely and I'm blue
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-22-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

You've expressed so well how it is to be sad and feeling alone...do keep writing!

Claire
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2 posted 02-22-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Have you heard that song, "blue"?
Just curious...it drives me crazy,
seems to be full of nonsense,
but catchy all the same, this tune.
Very desolate poem here, Vandana.
I hope you find some cheer within
that will have you writing in more
colors than one really soon!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 02-23-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Now little Ms. VanDana

Blue is a lovely color
when you wear it,
not when you bear it.

Love is the pink
of the blush
on the cheeks
with a heart-felt flush.

Green is the shade
of a new friend made.
Hello FRIEND

I hope your heart
finds a RAINBOW again.
~*Marge*~




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tracie66
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4 posted 02-23-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Vandana soo sad    but cheer up we're talking to you     Marge as usual you put a smile on everyone's face great reply I loved it.  HUGS to Vandana and a  
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