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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
haiku 003 after the long rains sweet music in these caverns - morning's waterfalls. haiku 004 on the beach dawnlight spreads from gull to gull - I sip my tea. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
haiku 001 & haiku 002 ??????????????????? I envy your location (beach)! Ah, to sip tea as the sun comes up on distant ocean horizon...lucky lady! Danny |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
these are great...we use to do these in a poetry workshop I took...they are a lot harder than they seem..you made it look easy take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Danny, I will email you 001 and 002 posted here last month  Janet, thanks..you're right, much more to it then it seems. I studied extensively for 2 years before I really tried to write it...still learning |
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