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A Realization~

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devina
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0 posted 02-21-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina



Soul-shaking  passion,
Pure beyond a doubt-
Swirling against
The Chocolate of
Your eyes.

Endearing words-
In short whispers,
Breathe across
The Silhouette
Of my neck.

Soft fingertips-
Melt into my skin,
Loving every inch
Of a Soul
That is Yours.

So this
Is
What
They call
~Love~



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Breathe~
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1 posted 02-21-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

OoooOooooh...

~Soft fingertips-
Melt into my skin,
Loving every inch
Of a Soul
That is Yours.!

HOT!...Nice write Devina... )  


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
Michael
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2 posted 02-21-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Here you go again!  I decide I'm not going into the Adult forum and then you go and get me all worked up in Open albeit in a different way.  Your emotion pours forth in everything you write, devina.  This is breathtaking.


Michael
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3 posted 02-21-2000 06:02 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

*shiver shiver* hoooooo......
did the room just get warmer??!!
beeeeeeoooootifull!

 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
Sven
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4 posted 02-21-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Yes it is Devina!  Isn't it great?

I'm going to keep this one to send to a certain someone. . . thank you in advance. . .

I love the phrase. . . "The Chocolate of your eyes. . ." almost good enough to eat!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 02-21-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Beautiful poem girl!  You make me proud for sure...You do have a way with making your words quite edible!  LOL  I guess it's that Arkansas thing!  
Corazon
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6 posted 02-21-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

very nice....love that pff, edible words...but yes that's a good way to describe it...very effective poem
devina
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7 posted 02-21-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Breathe- I thank you...it's this imagination of mine going overboard again I guess!!!lol

Michael- Glad I didn't send you to the shower..hehe Emotion is Poetry is it not??? Thank you m'friend!!!

Glorfindel- I think I might have sneaked into the thermostat room...hehe Pardon me!!!

Sven- I hope she enjoys it too hun...I take it that all is going well with you???

Femme- Edible is a nice word huh???hehe I suppose it does have a lot to do with that...country girls can be the most "blunt" women in the world!!!!

Corozon-Thank you hun...glad to be the effective one!!hehe



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
HelmutB
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8 posted 02-21-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I don't know if they call that Love luv
But I sure take that chocolate of your eyes  
Short it is, but is't so sweet and soooo beautiful.


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 02-21-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oooh...just the way I like my chocolate...
HOT and spicy...LOL  very nice work...read very smoothly...
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman


devina
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10 posted 02-21-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Helmut- these eyes are green sweetheart!!! And I thank you for the compliment dearie!!!

Janet- Well we agree very well on one thing, chocolate is as good as it gets!!!! And good for more than just eating!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Balladeer
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11 posted 02-21-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

WHEW! How did this one get past me? I can almost feel those soft fingertips melting into your skin. There's nothing like a country girl to know what she likes and say what she knows. Great work here  
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 02-21-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
Delightful.
Scrumptiously seductive.
I'll even bet
~the chocolate melts in your mouth,
not in your hand.~
&
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Parker
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13 posted 02-22-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

devina, very very nice, I like to see you take the chocolate topic a little further in adult. It might explain to me why chocolate is such a turn on to women.

Parker
devina
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14 posted 02-22-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Right you are Deer...and counrty girls do it best, I assure you!!! (poetry of course!!)

Marge- I've been grinning at your comment for quite a few minutes...and yah...it melts in your mouth...not er...your hands!!!

James- give me a day to think on it...then look for me in adult dear James...I'm always up to a challenge!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
January Flowers
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15 posted 02-22-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Is THAT what it is?

"Soul-shaking passion
Pure beyond a doubt"

Have you read this aloud?
Flows nicely, poignantly
and sounds so happy.
Very nice.
devina
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16 posted 02-22-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Now that I've figuted out what it is...I just have to FIND it!!!hehe

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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