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A Realization~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Soul-shaking passion, Pure beyond a doubt- Swirling against The Chocolate of Your eyes. Endearing words- In short whispers, Breathe across The Silhouette Of my neck. Soft fingertips- Melt into my skin, Loving every inch Of a Soul That is Yours. So this Is What They call ~Love~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
OoooOooooh... ~Soft fingertips- Melt into my skin, Loving every inch Of a Soul That is Yours.! HOT!...Nice write Devina...  ) I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Here you go again! I decide I'm not going into the Adult forum and then you go and get me all worked up in Open albeit in a different way. Your emotion pours forth in everything you write, devina. This is breathtaking. Michael |
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Glorfindel Junior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 22Auckland, New Zealand |
*shiver shiver* hoooooo...... did the room just get warmer??!! beeeeeeoooootifull! Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse, My love shal live everyoung in my verse. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes it is Devina! Isn't it great? I'm going to keep this one to send to a certain someone. . . thank you in advance. . . I love the phrase. . . "The Chocolate of your eyes. . ." almost good enough to eat!! --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Beautiful poem girl! You make me proud for sure...You do have a way with making your words quite edible! LOL I guess it's that Arkansas thing!  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very nice....love that pff, edible words...but yes that's a good way to describe it...very effective poem |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Breathe- I thank you...it's this imagination of mine going overboard again I guess!!!lol Michael- Glad I didn't send you to the shower..hehe Emotion is Poetry is it not??? Thank you m'friend!!! Glorfindel- I think I might have sneaked into the thermostat room...hehe Pardon me!!!  Sven- I hope she enjoys it too hun...I take it that all is going well with you??? Femme- Edible is a nice word huh???hehe I suppose it does have a lot to do with that...country girls can be the most "blunt" women in the world!!!! Corozon-Thank you hun...glad to be the effective one!!hehe Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I don't know if they call that Love luv But I sure take that chocolate of your eyes  Short it is, but is't so sweet and soooo beautiful. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh...just the way I like my chocolate... HOT and spicy...LOL very nice work...read very smoothly... take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Helmut- these eyes are green sweetheart!!! And I thank you for the compliment dearie!!! Janet- Well we agree very well on one thing, chocolate is as good as it gets!!!! And good for more than just eating!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WHEW! How did this one get past me? I can almost feel those soft fingertips melting into your skin. There's nothing like a country girl to know what she likes and say what she knows. Great work here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Delightful. Scrumptiously seductive. I'll even bet ~the chocolate melts in your mouth, not in your hand.~  &  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, very very nice, I like to see you take the chocolate topic a little further in adult. It might explain to me why chocolate is such a turn on to women. Parker |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Right you are Deer...and counrty girls do it best, I assure you!!! (poetry of course!!)Marge- I've been grinning at your comment for quite a few minutes...and yah...it melts in your mouth...not er...your hands!!! James- give me a day to think on it...then look for me in adult dear James...I'm always up to a challenge!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Is THAT what it is? "Soul-shaking passion Pure beyond a doubt" Have you read this aloud? Flows nicely, poignantly and sounds so happy. Very nice. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now that I've figuted out what it is...I just have to FIND it!!!hehe Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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