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Open Poetry #6
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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-21 04:07 PM



Dreamy unapproachable mountians overwhelmed your desire
Deadly heights reign in your love
Butterflies dance to fragrant silky romances in the night
You gracfully fly in torment of the oozing love
I am in heaven taking the halo of pain
Moving slow twards you smiling.....


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patchoulipumpkin
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 196
Bermuda
1 posted 2000-02-21 05:09 PM


Hey Nikki, try posting this in Open Poetry or critical analysis, where you will get more comments on it.  This is usually set aside just for prose, so people might not comment on it, and raise discussion that is raised in the poetry posts.  Good luck with your poem.
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-02-22 05:37 PM


Patch is right, so on it goes to Open #6!
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