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spiked
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Hammond, La USA


0 posted 02-16-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

To simply say I love you
In no way can it describe.
The passion and desire
How much you make me thrive.

You bring a certain fire
A gentle burning glow
A fire like no other
I could ever know.

Itís with me every morning
And with me when I sleep
I need to be inside you
Your warmth that is so deep.

To hold your naked body
Your breast pressed close to mine.
The softness of your skin
Our bodies intertwined.

I wake up in the morning
And feel that you are there
Wrap my arms around you
You know how much I care.

Iíve written many phrases
And all of which no doubt
Contain the many pleasures
Your all that Iím about.
© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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1 posted 02-17-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

OH  MY  !!!

You just completely and totally described the exact way I feel about my wife.

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!

Very well done, wery well indeed.


"Your all that Iím about."

That has to be one of the most powerful phrases I've read in poetry in a long, long time.    It completly describes TRUE LOVE.

VERY VERY WELL DONE!!

Chris


p.s.  sorry if I seem over enthusiastic...I just love a great poem.

Chris

Betty Gravitt
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2 posted 02-17-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

spiked... I remember the feeling well, all to well. Very nice poem.

 B Gravitt

just_another_fe
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3 posted 02-17-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

GREAT POEM *WISHES FOR THAT*  
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 02-17-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

The passion in this piece is grand, to be sure, but what touches me is the degree of accompanying devotion that you express so well...this is beautiful, in word and sentiment, spiked.
spiked
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5 posted 02-17-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks Chris, betty and just another. was afraid to post it thought it might cross the line for open poetry but this is where i like to post so I took a chance. hopefully my judgement was right.
serenity blaze
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6 posted 02-17-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Mmmmm...what else could I say?  You just keep
getting better, and better, and better...
spiked
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7 posted 02-17-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you meadowmuse. Was one written from the heart to the one I love.
spiked
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8 posted 02-17-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks serenity
Hoped you might like it.
 
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