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Mapping of The Soul
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Mapping of The Soul |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Lighting has accrued, static is in the air, movement is taking place my soul is shifting as though the ground is giving way. Rifts and valleys have appeared upon the palette of my soul, cracks run deep to the very marrow. Scanning familiar ground, finding its been changed. Age has little to do with the mapping that has taken place. Strong willed and confident in my beliefs. No one having power over my soul, but I was wrong. The territory ahead is not to my liking. I will have to start charting my own course in life. Being held to this ground in which I sit stagnate, without clear direction is not for me. We became one but, you hold the maps and keys. You do not even let me suggest a direction without laying blame. Yes I could go on weathering the storms, but I am seeing falling stars and wish upon smoother plains to travel. Enlightenment is upon me, I am being charged, there will be change. I will once again have power over my soul. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Insightful! Well written! A powerful entry to Passions! Welcome Cerenity...  Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Very well written !If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Cerenity! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful!! Welcome to Passions. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Chris |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
More power to you...this one shows inner strength, never lose sight of that m'friend!! Welcome!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Very nice entry Cerenity. Welcome to Passion  I hope to see more of your writing`s. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
This poem is beatiful. It displays insight into yourself and this is vitally important. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
To all of you wonderful friends that replied to my poem thank you so much. I don't know if this happend to anyone else here at passions but it happend to me. I have been waiting a long time for a chance to give the world one of my poems. I never dreamed of a place like passions, I only just resently got on to a computer ever in my life and to of thought of this place being here well!! When I read all of your wonderful words I cried tears I never had exspected, feelings I will have to say put me to my knees and a weight came off of me like water. At this point there is no word to express my thanks (see that word is just not big enough) to tell you how I feel. I will remember this one forever. Cerenity |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cerenity~ I was jumping up and down applauding this poem! I love it. So very wonderful. Take the control and never give it away again!  - SEA |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Cerenity, welcome to Passions. Great poem, I may add. Definately gets one thinking. Michael |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
May I also welcome you to Passions and say that we have been waiting for you as well. So nice to have you here! Grab hold of that "power" and never let go. Very nice poem! Danny |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem Cerenity. You are the writer of your poem, called destiny, yes? Welcome to Passions |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Our Passionate world always has room for a bit of Cerenity...  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
ok.ok. ok. I am a little lost just about now????? My poem was creeping off of page three to go were I do not know???? and at a blink of an EYE it now is back to page one????? Don't get me wrong I am what, what, someone has to have a good word for all of this wonderful feelings I have right now and the word happy is just not BIG enough anyway I thank you all from the bottum of my heart.. Thank you Nan you made my day. Cerenity |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And now it bounces up from the bottom of page one to the top. Isn't it neat how it does that? That happens when somebody really loves your poem, which I do Liz |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Hmmmm.... From the bottom of page one again... Straight back to the top If someone don't get control of this It just might never stop. LOL Loved it enough to check it out again. Thanks Cerenity, and welcome...again.LOL Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
This is such a great poem. I have a close family member who is going through such soul serching and has recently expressed to me what your poem says so nicely. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great first post may we all see the poets progress forevermore o yuh |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A truer bid for personal power is seldom seen...Welcome to the forum, sister! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I will keep it simple This is Beautiful, need, cute, good, special, excellent, brilliant, extraordinary and, oh I forgot welcome to Passions Where have you been all this time??? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
OK BEFORE I RESPOND TO EVERYBODY AM I THE ONLY ONE HAVING TROUBLE WITH MY USER NAME AND PASSWORD??????????????????? MORE TIMES THAN NOT I CAN NOT GET ON TO REPLY I am going to reregister under Cerenty-1 in case this trouble still keeps going for any one wanting to talk I hope it works.... WOW this computer stuff is something AAAA OK now to all of you wonderful Sprits, I keep checking my pulse to see if I am dreaming all of this. Who would of thought a nick name, pasword, and a little red folder flapping open and shut would of brought my spirit in to such bliss, but it did. I look at all of your replys and think are they for real do those words exist on my screen and are the names that appear beside there thoughts truly a soul speaking of me. I dreamed of a day when my spirit could sore and speek to another and be understood and that day came. May you all be blessed in word, thought, and deed for I have been by you. Thank you, Cerenity Ps, I still am going to try and use my first name Cerenity but if it does not work I'll try the other one. Cerenity-1 |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
EXCELENT Cerenity. I have to send this one back to the top. I can relate to this one so much. Your last stanza was so encouraging. Your possitivety capured my heart. I had that positivity for awhile but I lost it somewhere. You have encouraged me to look for it ance again. Well done!!! |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Cerenity, This poem makes me want to break free from my corporate prison & start my own coffee shop, except the flaw with that vision are the poor labored people that pick beans for next to nothing. I suppose I can dream that I won the lotto and helped those people that pick beans. Great job with this...you really opened yourself up. I look forward to reading more. Chris Goodman Blue Moon |
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