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Tu Puedes Llover
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Tu Puedes Llover |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Tu puedes llover Tu puedes llover en este lugar Tu puedes llover en mi cuerpo usted puedes llover dentro de mí. Translated: You can rain inside this room you can rain upon my body you can rain inside of me. (c) 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You ROCK ! This is so YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
WOW!! In all the years of reading and writing poety I've never...well...I've just never. Thank you. Chris |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
mi lluvia quiere cubrirte en un gran tormenta, mi vida. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, Your talent is so versatile. Your poetry so deep of message, inviting between those sweetly read lines. The meaning so pleasurefull, I shudder at the next coming of your poetic movements. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, thank you so much!!! I was a bit hesitant to put me on display! LOL Chris, you've never what? LOL Thank you. and Balladeer, mi poeta dulce, le deseo la sol siempre. [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Why parker, thank you! You are very kind,indeed sir! Corinne |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's obvious to me your poetry is good in any language. Thanks for sharing! (no time for doubts) Mike |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you so much, Mike! Corinne |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Este es muy hermosa, Senorita. Un mil de gracias. Y tu tampoco puedes llover en mi corazon. Hasta luego! ~El Pistolero~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Corinne!  Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gracias, Corinne. Como yo vivo in la Florida, es seguro que siempre voy a tener mucho sol. Agradezco sus palabras. Gunslinger, you old bi-lingual cowboy!! Who da thunk it? (Try "tambien" instead of "tampoco" ) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Denise - muchas gracias! Gracias, Gunslinger! Lluvia puede ser tal metáfora del wonderul, si? Sí, Balladeer, pero, era discurso del sol dentro de su casa, mi poeta dulce! Fielmente el tuyo, Corina Maria |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sure that's all easy for you to say Das Gedicht ist so kurz Aber dennoch so Bedeutungsvoll The peom is so short But yet the words are so meaningful Lovely poem Corinne, may it always rain for you. Well with lots of Sunshine too |
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