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Tu Puedes Llover

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Corinne
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0 posted 02-15-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Tu puedes llover

Tu puedes llover
en este lugar
Tu puedes llover
en mi cuerpo
usted puedes llover
dentro de mí.

Translated:

You can rain
inside this room
you can rain
upon my body
you can rain
inside of me.


(c) 2000 Corinne Bailey
© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-15-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~
You ROCK !
This is so YOU !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CMGrimm
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2 posted 02-15-2000 11:18 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

WOW!!  In all the years of reading and writing poety I've never...well...I've just never.  Thank you.

Chris
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3 posted 02-15-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

mi lluvia quiere cubrirte en un gran tormenta, mi vida.
Parker
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4 posted 02-16-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, Your talent is so versatile. Your poetry so deep of message, inviting between those sweetly read lines. The meaning so pleasurefull, I shudder at the next coming of your poetic movements.

Parker
Corinne
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5 posted 02-16-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Marge, thank you so much!!!  I was a bit hesitant to put me on display!  LOL

Chris, you've never what? LOL Thank you.

and Balladeer, mi poeta dulce, le deseo la sol siempre.



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-16-2000).]
Corinne
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6 posted 02-16-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Why parker, thank you!  You are very kind,indeed sir!


Corinne
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7 posted 02-16-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

It's obvious to me your poetry is good in any language. Thanks for sharing! (no time for doubts)

Mike
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8 posted 02-16-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you so much, Mike!

Corinne
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Este es muy hermosa, Senorita. Un mil de gracias. Y tu tampoco puedes llover en mi corazon. Hasta luego!
~El Pistolero~
Denise
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10 posted 02-16-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Corinne!  

Denise
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11 posted 02-16-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gracias, Corinne. Como yo vivo in la Florida, es seguro que siempre voy a tener  mucho sol. Agradezco sus palabras.

Gunslinger, you old bi-lingual cowboy!! Who da thunk it? (Try "tambien" instead of "tampoco"   )
Corinne
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12 posted 02-16-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Denise - muchas gracias!

Gracias, Gunslinger! Lluvia puede ser tal metáfora del wonderul, si?

Sí, Balladeer, pero, era discurso del sol dentro de su casa, mi poeta dulce!

Fielmente el tuyo,

Corina Maria
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13 posted 02-16-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sure that's all easy for you to say

Das Gedicht ist so kurz
Aber dennoch so Bedeutungsvoll

The peom is so short
But yet the words are so meaningful

Lovely poem Corinne, may it always rain for you. Well with lots of Sunshine too
 
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