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Rod17WA
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since 2000-02-16
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0 posted 2000-02-16 06:17 PM


Love?

Whats Love?
there are poems and lyrics
trying to explain the real meaning of a simple word,
But none of them will ever come close,
bacause you could spend hours describing the texture,
but You'll never understand it, if You dont get to smell the rose.


For many years I wondered,
what it would be like to completely lose myself for someone,
to feel my breath being taken away, and feel my soul having no one to blame.

For many years I wondered,
What it would be like to fall in love so badly, that everything i said, and every moment spent would feel so right,
to wake up every morning proud of having You in my life,
to have someone to hold tight when everything starts to fall apart.


But Today I no longer wonder,
I've finally found the real meaning of love,
the very  person i was meant for,
everything i wanted and i could never ask for more,
And if I could tell the world just one thing,
it would be to always believe in things unseen, because nothing is more powerful than the message of a dream.


© Copyright 2000 Rod17WA - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

1 posted 2000-02-16 06:24 PM


ahhhhh, the words of being in love...really nicely done....welcome  
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-02-16 06:30 PM


Welcome to Passions. I am happy that you have been able to find that dream. Some of us are still looking but the dream still burns brightly. This is a wonderful introduction to our little family.

Again welcome.        

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-02-16 07:18 PM


Welcome!  How could poetry exist without love?  
HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
4 posted 2000-02-16 08:44 PM


Welcome to Passions
Love is Poerty
And Poetry is Love
You showed it within your poem
Well done


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
Georgia United States
5 posted 2000-02-16 10:05 PM


Rod17WA... wish I cuold believe again. I enjoyed this very much.

 B Gravitt


January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
6 posted 2000-02-16 10:05 PM


Interesting First Post!
I enjoyed the depth of your thought on this one.
Welcome to Passions!

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