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Gates of Pain

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spiked
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0 posted 02-14-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

The passions pass
As the days go by.
The fires flash
And then they die.

You lit the fire
To start the burn
Then lie in wait
As I twist and turn.

The heat of love
Has fried my soul.
Taken my pride
Taken itís toll.

So sit not back
And watch & wait.
As I suffer so
To pass this gate.

This gate of pain
Is where I sit.
This gate of pain
Which causes fits.

To heal this pain
Is what I must do.
Be it moving forward
Without you.

So look real deep
For it stands before you
The time has come
I have no more to
Give you free


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Enola
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1 posted 02-14-2000 05:28 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

   Wow - I've felt the same recently and you've described this so much better than I ever could.  The day I get that good, is the day that pigs fly.
silvershaddow
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2 posted 02-14-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for silvershaddow   Email silvershaddow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvershaddow

A great poem wish describes pain perfectly. Well Done.
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3 posted 02-14-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

~*HUGS*~
~*Marge*~


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spiked
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4 posted 02-14-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you very much for your kind words as they are very much appreciated. Give yourself more crdit Enola writing comes from inside. just need to find the right words.
Thank you silvershadow and **HUGS** to you Marge  
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5 posted 02-14-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Ouch.  I am sorry, spiked.  I didn't think it
could possibly hurt anymore than it already
did.  Today just amplifies it all, I guess.
Know that you are in my thoughts today...
As you well know, I know how you feel, and
you said it, perfectly.  Well done.
spiked
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6 posted 02-15-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

thanks serenity doesn't hurt to have someone on your side.
Rich
CMGrimm
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7 posted 02-15-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Ahh...now I see the darker more painful side.  Well written, well layed out...but very painful.  I realize I can't possibly know what it is you are struggling with, but always remember there are brighter days ahead and you have many here who can only hope and pray for you.

Chris
spiked
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8 posted 02-15-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

thanks Chris
Love is not always an easy course. Some things require work and or pain to survive.
Appreciate the support.
Rich
 
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