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Birthday suprise

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jytree
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0 posted 01-26-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for jytree   Email jytree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jytree

Here is your birthday suprise like no other,
If you want you can share it with a sister or brother,
January 28 the day you were born,
With a smile on you face you were cute to adore,
Now your all grown up look at you,
That same cute little cute smile your so cool,
People don't see what I see,
When your eyes sprakle when you look at me,
When our eyes meet a spark goes off,
Please don't run I didn't mean to scare you off,
I just want to say that your hot,
Don't think you not,
Please don't agure with me,
It's not right,
After you read this poem,
I hope you take my picture and hold it all night,
Your birthday a special day,
This is why I am honoring you this way,
After you read this I hope we don't grown apart,
But if we do don't worry your always be in my heart,
So in a way we will never be apart,
Your my best friend,
I don't want that to end,
I just want you to know,
I like you alot,
It was time to show,
How special you are to me,
It is enough to set me free,
This poem is just one way to say,
We are best friends and that will stay,
If not I will hunt you down,
Until you make me go away,
This is my way to say,
That your special to me,
Better stay that way,
You can run,
You can hide,
But you cannot stop how I feel inside.

Happy birthday

By Jay vaughn

© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-26-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

loved the poem Jay! It was so cute!  

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2 posted 03-14-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very sweet, Jay! I am sure this was much appreciated.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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