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PREACH
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0 posted 02-07-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for PREACH   Email PREACH   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PREACH

THE MAKE UP OF A MAN


HOW MUCH IS A GOOD ONE WORTH?

WE ALL EITHER STRIVE TO BE ONE OR OBTAIN ONE FROM BIRTH.

DOES HE HAVE ALL YOU NEED, OR DO YOU NEED ALL HE HAS?

AN EASIER QUESTION TO ANSWER THAN TO ASK?

WHAT'S THE TASK?

IS IT SHOWING THE LOVE, OR LOVING TO SHOW?

KNOWING THE RIGHT TIME TO KNOCK AT THE DOOR WITH MORE.

MORE THAN JUST FLOWERS AND CANDY HE BOUGHT FROM THE STORE,

MORE THAN WHAT HE DID FOR THE GIRL NEXT DOOR.

NOT LETTING HIS GOAL BE TO GET BETWEEN YOUR THIEGHS,

BUT TO SEE, RECOGNIZE AND UNDERSTAND THE FIRE IN YOUR EYES

IN HOPES THAT YOU WILL ABLIGE AND TAKE OFF THE DESCIZE

LACED WITH LIES THAT YOU USED ON OTHER GUYS.
© Copyright 2000 PREACH - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 10-28-1999
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1 posted 02-07-2000 02:08 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome dear...I'll get back to you with and ending...but you've got a good idea going none the less!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


2 posted 02-07-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Welcome aboard, Preach.  Only a couple suggestions - check yer spellin', as dere's peeple in here who spell real gud - lol.  My only other suggestion is to include in your poem something about how all us men hate cats *g*.  (Don't worry.  As you get to know me, you will come to understand my comment about cats).  I think you have a great idea going here - keep at it.
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 02-07-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

welcome to passions...

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Dr.Moose1
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since 09-05-99
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Bewilderment , USA


4 posted 02-09-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Welcome Preach,
I also agree that this is worth pursuing( both the poem and the subject).Asking the questions may not always get you the answer you want , but it's a start .
Doc
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
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5 posted 02-09-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Welcome to passion
The subject is a touchy one
There are no easy answers I think


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

 
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