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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
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0 posted 2000-02-09 06:47 PM


Sitting in a cafe, an old man said to me-
“I know you fer a cowboy, that much is plain to see.
I bet you sure can fan a bronc, and ride a bad bull, too-
You sure put me in mind of me, when I was young like you”.

I didn’t give an invite, but he pulled up a chair-
And pulled his old black Stetson off, revealing silver hair.
“I hail from up in Idaho, not fur from Cor’ d’ lane-
An’ askin’ for a bait of grub shore goes agin the grain.

I used to ride the rough stock, and followed rodeo-
I made it to the Finals, back in ‘54, or so....
Age and breaks shore slowed me down, I fin’ly had to quit-
But I been givin’ lots of thought to going back to it.

I think I’ve got a few more rides, just one more go around-
I know I’m old, I’ve got to try, before they put me down-
A few more miles I’d like to drive, more dirt beneath my boots-
I have to have a few more times, at comin’ out the chutes”.

I paid the tab, and left the tip; we walked across the floor-
I handed him a fifty, as we walked out the door....
He grinned and said, “I’m much obliged, I’ll catch you in Cheyenne”.
And climbed into a beat-up truck, we never met again.

He more than paid the fifty back with his hard earned advice-
I know I’ve lived a fuller life that’s had a lot more spice...
A few more rides, a few more roads; new dirt beneath my boots-
Like him, I’d like a few more times a’ comin out the chutes.



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Adriahh
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 18

1 posted 2000-02-09 06:51 PM


I think it's great, really. I'm more of a story poem lover than an "inner turmoil" poem lover.  

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-02-09 06:57 PM


Good'un.
Used to enjoy the Final's when they were in Oklahoma.  Doesn't quite seem right to have 'em in Vegas.

John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas
3 posted 2000-02-09 07:17 PM


Thank you Adriahh, and yep, Mike, you're right. But the weather sure is nicer. lol
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