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25 posted 02-08-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Simply beautiful.  Beauty is simplicity and your writing brings this out.  Besides the poem, I'm very happy you've heard the words that affirm your prayers.
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26 posted 02-08-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

What a gift you have given in this heart filled poem.  Very touching  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

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27 posted 02-08-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I almost feel like taking a've all made me so happy! Thanks...oops I guess that should be a curtsie...

Thank you! Ruth I don't know about giving this one, though I did frame the other one for him.  I will think about that!

Thank you all you're wondeful!


When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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28 posted 02-10-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Bang-Up job!
Bow or curtsie, doesn't matter!
We should be thanking YOU!
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29 posted 02-10-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

Encore! great poem WhtDove, your poetry about your husband is brilliant...  
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30 posted 02-10-2000 07:04 AM       View Profile for Evad   Email Evad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Evad

Most excellent!  The free-flowing effortless display of words is most touching.  It plucked a heart string.
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31 posted 02-10-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoy reading the feelings from your heart spoken in such sincerity.  I share your joy that your husband has seen your beauty and offers you his admiration and appreciation.  Very lovely.   James
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32 posted 02-10-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Rebecca - now aren't you just a hoot?  Low self esteem?  I would never in a lifetime have guessed that you have reason for low self esteem.  You are so talented, and you have your priorities so straight - how could you not be perfect in all the ways that mean anything at all?  Have you been reading those %*&^$#*-able women's magazines??  Only in there will you learn that you are too fat-too thin, too weak-too strong, too young-too old, too sensitive-too much a b***c, too good-too mean, too... well, you get the idea.  Ask anybody in here who has read your words of poetry and encouragement, and they will tell you this, "Rebecca, you are TOO MUCH!!!!"  We all see you, and we all rejoice that your husband has found the words he likely struggled to find his whole life - he loves you.  He reminds of Toby Keith's song, "Me, too."

Toerag, I think the Mamas and Papas sang it, too!  lol
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