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Act One...."Take One"

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Toerag
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0 posted 01-25-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

In my act
I don't have things to remember
I have things to do
In fact
I don't even have an act
I just act like I do

"Take Two"
© Copyright 2000 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Bad Boy
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1 posted 01-25-2000 07:07 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

WOW,
where do I start?
I can tell that this one took hour`s of thinking,writing and alot of feeling.
You really have out done your self on this one Toe.
They just keep getting better
I`ll set back and wait for act 2  



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

Toerag
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2 posted 01-25-2000 07:11 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

BB....Obviously, you haven't read a whole lotta my crap?...This really is by far one of my better ones?  And since I've stopped slamming Balladeer....I just ain't got nuthin left to write about....(as you can tell..."see above")....
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 01-25-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The two bad boys of Passions put on quite a show. And this is just act one.
Liz
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 01-25-2000 07:16 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I've heard it's been said this world is a stage.
We are actors in dialogues producing a play.
We all have our parts, no matter how small;
A hero, some jokers, the Villian, a fool.
In come the actors, we all play the part,
pretending we're something we surely are not.
The song's awful pretty, the drama so grave.
A huge fabrication but such a display.
Since fame's much too fleeting and death's such a shame,
we all take our place for the purpose we came.
Then the curtain comes down Finale and all,
we recall in our memory what the encore neglects.
So much for the show, I suppose we should go.
All the world is a stage; and the show will go on.

I for one am glad that you act like you do =)  Cause you help make this place great!  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

suthern
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5 posted 01-25-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Is it redundant to ditto Echo? *G*
Nan
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6 posted 01-25-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey - Do you always act this way?... or is it all an act??... and did you steal a piece of my eraser???
Denise
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7 posted 01-25-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Never a dull moment around here!!  

Denise
Toerag
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8 posted 01-25-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I've got to act to maintain any kind of life?...I know this poem sucks...but what the hell?...I am Toerag yanno?.....and just think?  If it weren't for me, yall'd have nuthing but great stuff to read.....and if everything were just great, expertly written, and full of wisdom and wit......we'd all be Balladeer?....Now wouldn't that be a pain in the ass?....
 
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